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Storm Cloud

dark     wind     hard     gritty

                           rampaging           destroying         laughing


                                                 your blood words                        wound me






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Love Generously
David Meade
May 9, 2015

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/24/2019 8:54:00 AM

Hello David Meade, I find your poem deep with meaning, and feelings. have a nice day my friend.

Lee Brownlee

Date: 10/17/2015 8:09:00 AM

Very descriptive, felt the storm overhead! Thank you.

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/22/2015 9:13:00 AM

Good structure with a natural cadence that welcomes the reader and enlist further exploration. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2015 10:35:00 PM

AHA. I found one!!! And it is another one with interesting format. You are a WHIZ with this kind of poetry. Also, thanks for your remark on my limerick. I really do hate showoffs.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/12/2015 4:37:00 PM

deep dark and fascinating Dave hugs 7***

Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/11/2015 12:36:00 AM

I agree with Arthur it's refreshing to read your out of the box style, and it's a amazing piece of poetry, awesomely done and worked, very powerful by the way in your wording and expression, very cool my friend, cheri

David Meade
Date: 5/11/2015 10:05:00 PM

Dear Ms. Dunn, never an unkind word from you -- I feels like a big hugged - safe, kind, and reassuring. Thank-you for taking time to visit with me and your encouragement is always appreciated. Much love and light.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/10/2015 11:59:00 PM

I love to see creativity and thinking outside the crate ( so to speak ) This poem is amazing!!

David Meade
Date: 5/11/2015 10:03:00 PM

Thank-you Mr. Vaso for your visit and kind words. It's a total flip from the poem -- nicely done! Instead of blood, your words are flesh and uplifting -- all the best dear brother.

Constance La France

Date: 5/10/2015 8:39:00 AM

David, you have created a deep and creative poem, love the layouts you imagine, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, I am...

David Meade
Date: 5/10/2015 10:44:00 AM

Thank-you BW, I always enjoy your visits. Hope all is well with you. Light, love and hugs.

Poesy Relish

Date: 5/9/2015 11:06:00 PM

The use of the word 'laughing' gives us the exact feeling of this short pen... deep suffering hidden in your words.#7.. hope the storm abates in no time... nad

David Meade
Date: 5/10/2015 10:52:00 AM

Thank-you Ms. Relish, I am you caught my play on laughing -- it makes the blood words even more hurtful!! As always thank-you for your precious time and words. Much light, love and hugs.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/9/2015 10:54:00 PM

Hey, Coach....LO here....It's been a while since you posted. I've been in this storm....Thanks for holding my had till it abated. Hugs to you.

David Meade
Date: 5/10/2015 10:59:00 AM

My dearest LO, I finally broke the ice but we will see -- I have seen the pain you have endured with words . . . your courage, endurance and tenacity is inspiring to me. Through all of it -- what remains is love and hope. By the way, you have very soft hands . . . just saying. Love, light, and big hugs!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/10/2015 3:33:00 AM

That was...thanks for holding my HAND through it. ;)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/9/2015 5:46:00 PM

Oh, a deep and penetrating expression of how deeply words can maim one's spirit. Wonderfully written David! 7

David Meade
Date: 5/10/2015 11:01:00 AM

You are so right Connie -- I think of one word especially when I see your name -- Aloha -- now that is a great word. Thank-you for your support and kindness, love, light and hugs back to you!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/9/2015 5:38:00 PM

These types of storm clouds can cause a lot of pain, David. Hope you are keeping well. All the best. // paul

David Meade
Date: 5/10/2015 11:03:00 AM

I am well my friend. I am thank-you for your generous visit and encouraging words. All the best back to you and a big man-hug!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/9/2015 4:37:00 PM

Excellent imagery.

David Meade
Date: 5/10/2015 11:04:00 AM

Thank-you M.L. -- the black, red, and greys make a vivid picture. Thank-you for your visit! Much light, love, and hugs.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/9/2015 4:37:00 PM

such a powerful punch in this short write...love the tornado...Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 5/10/2015 11:08:00 AM

Such devastation with the tornadoes there yesterday...I pray for the families

David Meade
Date: 5/10/2015 11:05:00 AM

Thank-you for the visit -- that's a Texas tornado by the way!!! All the best my friend. Big man-hug!

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/9/2015 4:14:00 PM

Storm clouds. Blood words. Both damaging. Both cause harm. A powerful 3-line poetry. A 7. Glad to see a new post from you, David. Kim :). PS. Hope it's fiction, or at most, not personal account.

David Meade
Date: 5/10/2015 11:06:00 AM

Hope you are surviving the Dodong -- give us an update if you have a chance. Raining and flooding here today!! Thanks again for all of your support. Much love, light and hugs.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/9/2015 3:49:00 PM

The power of your words combined with the visual creates true art, David! It's been a LONG time since I've seen a post from you. I'm happy to be reading this and to get a new comment from you, too! Big hug, Rhonda

David Meade
Date: 5/10/2015 11:08:00 AM

Yes, it has been awhile . . . I am thankful that you have not forgotten me!! All the best dear Rhonda and I look forward to catching up on your poems. Big hugs.