Storm At Sea

Silently the wind slips into the night
Settling down beneath a silver moon
Shimmering across still waters,
Slowly creeping across somber sky
So stealthily no one sees the storm
Subtly slipping onto the farthest rim
Sailors’ warning sometimes an epitaph
Sunrise will see the sails must be trim
Suddenly, scurrying below to perform,
Sickly seamen who are wont to die
Still are called to stand their quarters
Simply to do their duty, none too soon,
Stretching sinews with all their might.

written August 4, 2021
[an experimental poem using alliteration
and reverse rhyming. The center of the 
poem is the line ending in "epitaph."
Thereafter the rhymes are reversed.]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Krutsinger Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 10:48 AM
I have enjoyed your alliterative write. This is the first time I have heard of reverse rhyming.
Hankins Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 4:42 PM
Hmmm, I have used it before, but I don't believe it is a real format. Maybe I have invented something here. I don't know. Maybe I'll take credit if some other people like it and start using it. You can have it if you want, Caren!
Koplin Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 3:53 PM
I do like it Milt!
Hankins Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 4:43 PM
Thanks, Mark. I'm so pleased you like it. Thanks for your read and your affirmation.
Daniel Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 3:37 AM
This is simply brilliant, Milton, love the new form:)
Hankins Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 4:44 PM
Thanks, Jo. See my note to Caren above. I'm glad you like it, so give it a go!
Poet Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 7:39 PM
You penned a great poem Miton; I enjoyed reading it. Your wording is perfect, and your imagery is wonderful. Blessings, dear friend.
Hankins Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 4:44 PM
Thank you so much, Lasaad. I really appreciated what you had to say about my poem.
Cholt Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 3:53 PM
The scene is crystal clear and a little bit scary. Nicely written.
Hankins Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 4:44 PM
Thanks so much, W.A. I appreciate your kind comment.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace