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Storm At Sea

Silently the wind slips into the night Settling down beneath a silver moon Shimmering across still waters, Slowly creeping across somber sky So stealthily no one sees the storm Subtly slipping onto the farthest rim Sailors’ warning sometimes an epitaph Sunrise will see the sails must be trim Suddenly, scurrying below to perform, Sickly seamen who are wont to die Still are called to stand their quarters Simply to do their duty, none too soon, Stretching sinews with all their might. written August 4, 2021 [an experimental poem using alliteration and reverse rhyming. The center of the poem is the line ending in "epitaph." Thereafter the rhymes are reversed.]

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Date: 8/7/2021 10:48:00 AM
I have enjoyed your alliterative write. This is the first time I have heard of reverse rhyming.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/7/2021 4:42:00 PM
Hmmm, I have used it before, but I don't believe it is a real format. Maybe I have invented something here. I don't know. Maybe I'll take credit if some other people like it and start using it. You can have it if you want, Caren!
Date: 8/5/2021 3:53:00 PM
I do like it Milt!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/7/2021 4:43:00 PM
Thanks, Mark. I'm so pleased you like it. Thanks for your read and your affirmation.
Date: 8/5/2021 3:37:00 AM
This is simply brilliant, Milton, love the new form:)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/7/2021 4:44:00 PM
Thanks, Jo. See my note to Caren above. I'm glad you like it, so give it a go!
Date: 8/4/2021 7:39:00 PM
You penned a great poem Miton; I enjoyed reading it. Your wording is perfect, and your imagery is wonderful. Blessings, dear friend.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/7/2021 4:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lasaad. I really appreciated what you had to say about my poem.
Date: 8/4/2021 3:53:00 PM
The scene is crystal clear and a little bit scary. Nicely written.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/7/2021 4:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, W.A. I appreciate your kind comment.

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