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''storm''

With the lightning and loud peals of thunder, the livid-blue clouds rumble and boil like a vat of churning, hot oil as cascades of rain force Life up from down under the dry, desert soil.

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Date: 6/14/2020 6:13:00 PM
I really liked your poem. I could feel the storm.
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Ngoc Nguyen
Date: 6/15/2020 6:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, Michael, for reading; commenting; and for your compliment! I am pleased that you liked my poem. ~Ngoc
Date: 6/14/2020 3:59:00 PM
Nice imagery
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Ngoc Nguyen
Date: 6/15/2020 6:21:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Team PoetrySoup, for reading; commenting; and for the compliment! I really appreciate it. ~Ngoc
Date: 6/14/2020 7:53:00 AM
Superbly configure out the storm....short pleasure to read
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Ngoc Nguyen
Date: 6/14/2020 9:01:00 AM
Thank you, MAHTAB, for reading and commenting! I appreciate it very much. ~Ngoc
Date: 7/18/2017 12:50:00 PM
The imagery is so strong and vivid it's as if I can see it! Love it!
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Ngoc Nguyen
Date: 7/18/2017 4:23:00 PM
Thanks, Paige, for loving my poem and for commenting! I appreciate it very much. Ngoc :-)

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