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Storm

       nimbus billowed
       the sky roared
       bolts flashed
       a deluge fell
       a thirst quenched
       nature prevailed
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Beaufort Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 5:39 PM
Lin, you earned your degree in astronomy. Now you get one in meteorology! You've described the progression of a storm better than most textbooks!! LOL and smiles!!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 12:42 PM
Your "Less Said" has few words with much said. Love the sky picture. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away..........
Rolland Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 2:40 PM
nature rules, enjoyed
Lane Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 3:02 PM
Thanks a lot, Yann.
DiMino Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 2:16 PM
A great storm in few well chosen words. Well done. Wonderful sense and imagery. Blessings.
Lane Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 3:01 PM
Thank you very much for your comments, Joe.
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