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'S' Words Contest sponsored by Constance La France

~ August 6, 2023

Storm

We cannot tame a raging storm, so with patience, 
we must wait for the calm.          ~ by poet


The balmy afternoon had been fulgent and warm
Until darkness foreshadowed an approaching storm
Wailing winds of the nor'easter would soon cause grief
damaging fragile coral growth upon the reef

Leaden clouds encroached and shrouded the gloomy day
The aura changed from gold to hue of graphite gray
It seemed as if an eclipse turned day into night
as feathered wings rose in unison to take flight

Thunder's billowed breath blew across the ocean's waves
as if the tempest was demanding what it craves
Atmosphere grew heavy with each powerful roar
White caps rushed with clangor against the sandy shore

With vengeance, the storm hurled jagged lightening strikes
Split second flashes that resembled silver spikes

 * * * 

Then, the deluge rained like arrows, sharp as metal
That would've wounded men like a stinging nettle
The monsoon swept overland, clear across the dunes
on zephyr winds that howled diabolical tunes

The storm seethed with a furor that was unsuppressed
leaving the seaside landscape despoiled and distressed
Battered by ferocious weather that was to blame
Nature's forces can be impossible to tame

Finally, squalls dwindled and waves no longer surged
Glowing rays of sunlight defiantly emerged
And so the storm came with raging temper to vent,
pillaged treasures from the sea. Yes, it came and went

It was quite a balmy evening, fulgent and warm
Upon the beach seashells lie, displaced by the storm
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Goldsmith Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 4:43 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Storm" is a wonderful write/quote/picture. Love It.... Have a great day.............
Sambourne Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 4:10 PM
Congratulations! This is a detailed, engaging poem about nature's fury + might. One feels the storm "...seethed with a furor." Top of the list posting for me. With best wishes, Brian
Lane Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 5:36 PM
Thank you for your wonderful review of my storm filled verses, Brian. I’m grateful for your visit. .
Lindley Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 8:50 AM
You my friend are indeed a poet's poet. Therse verses are awesome. A very, very fine poem. A fav again. God bless.
Lane Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 10:27 AM
Thank you for your time of reading me today, Robert as well as for your generous comments and faves.
Mcintosh Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 1:50 AM
This is amazing. I simply love the two. beautifully done. Just amazing... and God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina
Lane Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 4:12 AM
G'morning, Gina and thank you for such a complimentary review.
M  Avatar
August 6, 2023 at 2:59 PM
I ditto what Jan said…..you are so gifted Lin!! A truly incredible and totally captivating poem…..Debx
Lane Avatar
August 6, 2023 at 3:03 PM
And you are so complimentary. Thank you for all the support you give me in several ways, Deb. Hugs.
Allison Avatar
August 6, 2023 at 11:59 AM
This truly depicts the calm before the storm, what incredible imagery Lin, i struggle to write on decent sonnet, you are so gifted my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Lindley Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 1:55 PM
haha, I use the 12 syllable count on many of my sonnets. Gives me more freedom to elaborate in my writing. God bless.
Lane Avatar
August 6, 2023 at 3:02 PM
Before, during, and a titch of after. I hope two sonnets are not too long, but I wanted to take the storm full circle. Took a little poetic license with the 12-syllable count. Thank you, Jan. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 6, 2023 at 10:35 AM
Love: It seemed as if an eclipse turned day into night as feathered wings rose in unison to take flight…zephyr winds howled? Love the imagery!
Lane Avatar
August 6, 2023 at 3:00 PM
Thank you so much telling me which lines you particularly enjoyed, Kim. I always appreciate that.
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