Storm

On a rainy chilled winter indigo and violet night, howling furious wind blows with pounding fist against an old oak and its boughs delivering knockout blows to all the leaves. Lightning blast over the darkened sky followed by a crash of thunder shaking the house, as pelting ceaseless rain beat against the window pane. Malinda awoke addled from a deep restless sleep. She sat up in bed, listening to the storm, with a haunted looked turned her head and looked into the flickering golden orange hue beeswax candle flame casting moving shadows against the dark bedroom walls. She got up and walked to the window and looked out. Another jagged bolt of lightning streak across the sky and thunder again shook the house. She closed the curtains and walked back to bed pulling the covers over her head. 3/30/2019
Poetry Contest: Specificity in Poetry Sponsored by: Sheri Fresonke Harper

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/3/2019 8:52:00 AM
How descriptive and what beautiful colors! A storm is both beautiful and frightening! Congratulations :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/2/2019 3:47:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your 4th place win. I love it for all the rich details you provided. It captured one of those night storms which can wake one up and keep you watching the wonder outside. Strong work.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/30/2019 12:24:00 PM
Nature's dark choreography, challenging Man's resolute to stand unafraid before God's grandeur dearest Eve! Excellent imagery!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/30/2019 9:36:00 AM
What a gorgeous scene you have portrayed "golden orange hue beeswax candle flame" - you write like the old masters, Master!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/30/2019 8:16:00 AM
Well written Eve! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 3/30/2019 8:00:00 AM
Excellent. Well imagery write. Thanks for sharing it.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/30/2019 5:52:00 AM
The imagery is so vivid, your choice of words really add impetus to the theme.. Excellent write Eve..
Login to Reply
Date: 3/30/2019 3:15:00 AM
This is a glorious poem Eve - mother nature can be frightening - although if I am safely closed up in our home, we love to open the curtains wide and watch a storm - two years ago we had a direct hit in our garden which split a wonderful huge fern tree, and affected our TV'S computers, etc. thank goodness for insurance! Stay well Eve, Hugs and love Jenny.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad