Storm

On a rainy chilled winter indigo and violet night, howling furious wind blows with pounding fist against an old oak and its boughs delivering knockout blows to all the leaves. Lightning blast over the darkened sky followed by a crash of thunder shaking the house, as pelting ceaseless rain beat against the window pane. Malinda awoke addled from a deep restless sleep. She sat up in bed, listening to the storm, with a haunted looked turned her head and looked into the flickering golden orange hue beeswax candle flame casting moving shadows against the dark bedroom walls. She got up and walked to the window and looked out. Another jagged bolt of lightning streak across the sky and thunder again shook the house. She closed the curtains and walked back to bed pulling the covers over her head. 3/30/2019
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Awtry Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 8:52 AM
How descriptive and what beautiful colors! A storm is both beautiful and frightening! Congratulations :)
Harper Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 3:47 PM
Eve, congratulations on your 4th place win. I love it for all the rich details you provided. It captured one of those night storms which can wake one up and keep you watching the wonder outside. Strong work.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 12:24 PM
Nature's dark choreography, challenging Man's resolute to stand unafraid before God's grandeur dearest Eve! Excellent imagery!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 9:36 AM
What a gorgeous scene you have portrayed "golden orange hue beeswax candle flame" - you write like the old masters, Master!
Sands Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 8:16 AM
Well written Eve! :)
Sathasivam Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Excellent. Well imagery write. Thanks for sharing it.
One Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 5:52 AM
The imagery is so vivid, your choice of words really add impetus to the theme.. Excellent write Eve..
Proxenos Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 3:15 AM
This is a glorious poem Eve - mother nature can be frightening - although if I am safely closed up in our home, we love to open the curtains wide and watch a storm - two years ago we had a direct hit in our garden which split a wonderful huge fern tree, and affected our TV'S computers, etc. thank goodness for insurance! Stay well Eve, Hugs and love Jenny.
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