Virginia Gelok Poet Rhyme

Stop

I'm taking a break from all this hustle.
My mind is in a swirl, my nerves in a bustle.
My thoughts are scattered like a broken puzzle.
My mouth just won't stop, I need a muzzle.
I think i need a good big guzzle,
And you beside me just to snuggle.






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Caren Krutsinger January 25, 2022 at 1:46 AM This is why I no longer drink alcohol "My mouth just won't stop, I need a muzzle."

Krish Radhakrishna October 27, 2021 at 1:46 PM Congrats on your win with this different but interesting poem!! Virginia Gelok October 27, 2021 at 4:24 PM Thankyou so much. It was just for fun.

Christuraj Alex October 27, 2021 at 11:27 AM Such a beautifully jingling rhyme with a message of rest. Congratulations! Virginia Gelok October 27, 2021 at 4:25 PM Much appreciated. It was fun.

Ann Peck October 27, 2021 at 8:59 AM Sounds like a plan! :) Congratulations on your placement! Virginia Gelok October 27, 2021 at 4:26 PM And it was planned out. lol. Thankyou for your comment.

Line Gauthier October 27, 2021 at 8:01 AM charming monorhyme ~ Virginia Gelok October 27, 2021 at 4:27 PM Thankyou for the Honorable mention, it was a fun write.

Mystic Rose Rose October 24, 2021 at 6:12 PM Ah, the most natural thing to do is open our mouths and speak our truth, lol, nicely penned, gl dear friend, Virginia Gelok October 24, 2021 at 6:44 PM Past menopause and I don't drink so I just have to use my mouth! lol Thanks for your feed back.

Rico Leffanta October 24, 2021 at 11:53 AM Can not stop; how about a pause? Virginia Gelok October 24, 2021 at 4:27 PM So right, just breathe in, breathe out! lol Thanks for the comment.

L Milton Hankins October 24, 2021 at 10:30 AM Good one, Virginia. Exactly how I feel sometimes. Virginia Gelok October 24, 2021 at 4:29 PM Thanks, seems so much to do and no time to do it. But honestly I wouldn't have it any other way! Well perhaps a break now and then. lol

Vijay Pandit October 24, 2021 at 4:41 AM Nothing like a loving hug when life is posing hurdles. Well evoked, Virginia. Virginia Gelok October 24, 2021 at 4:31 PM so true, hugs can fix a lot of woes. Thanks for your comment.