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Stop

I'm taking a break from all this hustle. My mind is in a swirl, my nerves in a bustle. My thoughts are scattered like a broken puzzle. My mouth just won't stop, I need a muzzle. I think i need a good big guzzle, And you beside me just to snuggle. Bite Size poem no.24 poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/25/2022 1:46:00 AM
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This is why I no longer drink alcohol "My mouth just won't stop, I need a muzzle."
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/27/2021 1:46:00 PM
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Congrats on your win with this different but interesting poem!!
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 10/27/2021 4:24:00 PM
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Thankyou so much. It was just for fun.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/27/2021 11:27:00 AM
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Such a beautifully jingling rhyme with a message of rest. Congratulations!
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 10/27/2021 4:25:00 PM
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Much appreciated. It was fun.
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/27/2021 8:59:00 AM
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Sounds like a plan! :) Congratulations on your placement!
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 10/27/2021 4:26:00 PM
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And it was planned out. lol. Thankyou for your comment.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/27/2021 8:01:00 AM
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charming monorhyme ~
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 10/27/2021 4:27:00 PM
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Thankyou for the Honorable mention, it was a fun write.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 10/26/2021 10:46:00 AM
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I agree with every line Virginia, been there, done that. Well written and enjoyable to read.
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 10/26/2021 8:17:00 PM
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Much appreciated. I enjoyed writing it.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/24/2021 6:12:00 PM
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Ah, the most natural thing to do is open our mouths and speak our truth, lol, nicely penned, gl dear friend,
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 10/24/2021 6:44:00 PM
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Past menopause and I don't drink so I just have to use my mouth! lol Thanks for your feed back.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/24/2021 11:53:00 AM
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Can not stop; how about a pause?
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 10/24/2021 4:27:00 PM
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So right, just breathe in, breathe out! lol Thanks for the comment.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/24/2021 10:30:00 AM
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Good one, Virginia. Exactly how I feel sometimes.
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 10/24/2021 4:29:00 PM
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Thanks, seems so much to do and no time to do it. But honestly I wouldn't have it any other way! Well perhaps a break now and then. lol
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/24/2021 4:41:00 AM
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Nothing like a loving hug when life is posing hurdles. Well evoked, Virginia.
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 10/24/2021 4:31:00 PM
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so true, hugs can fix a lot of woes. Thanks for your comment.

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