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Stop

I'm taking a break from all this hustle.
My mind is in a swirl, my nerves in a bustle.
My thoughts are scattered like a broken puzzle.
My mouth just won't stop, I need a muzzle.
I think i need a good big guzzle,
And you beside me just to snuggle.






Bite Size poem no.24 poetry Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier

Copyright © Virginia Gelok | Year Posted 2021

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 1/25/2022 1:46:00 AM This is why I no longer drink alcohol "My mouth just won't stop, I need a muzzle." Login to Reply

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 10/27/2021 1:46:00 PM Congrats on your win with this different but interesting poem!! Login to Reply Virginia Gelok Date: 10/27/2021 4:24:00 PM Thankyou so much. It was just for fun.

Christuraj Alex Date: 10/27/2021 11:27:00 AM Such a beautifully jingling rhyme with a message of rest. Congratulations! Login to Reply Virginia Gelok Date: 10/27/2021 4:25:00 PM Much appreciated. It was fun.

Ann Peck Date: 10/27/2021 8:59:00 AM Sounds like a plan! :) Congratulations on your placement! Login to Reply Virginia Gelok Date: 10/27/2021 4:26:00 PM And it was planned out. lol. Thankyou for your comment.

Line Gauthier Date: 10/27/2021 8:01:00 AM charming monorhyme ~ Login to Reply Virginia Gelok Date: 10/27/2021 4:27:00 PM Thankyou for the Honorable mention, it was a fun write.

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 10/26/2021 10:46:00 AM I agree with every line Virginia, been there, done that. Well written and enjoyable to read. Login to Reply Virginia Gelok Date: 10/26/2021 8:17:00 PM Much appreciated. I enjoyed writing it.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/24/2021 6:12:00 PM Ah, the most natural thing to do is open our mouths and speak our truth, lol, nicely penned, gl dear friend, Login to Reply Virginia Gelok Date: 10/24/2021 6:44:00 PM Past menopause and I don't drink so I just have to use my mouth! lol Thanks for your feed back.

Rico Leffanta Date: 10/24/2021 11:53:00 AM Can not stop; how about a pause? Login to Reply Virginia Gelok Date: 10/24/2021 4:27:00 PM So right, just breathe in, breathe out! lol Thanks for the comment.

L Milton Hankins Date: 10/24/2021 10:30:00 AM Good one, Virginia. Exactly how I feel sometimes. Login to Reply Virginia Gelok Date: 10/24/2021 4:29:00 PM Thanks, seems so much to do and no time to do it. But honestly I wouldn't have it any other way! Well perhaps a break now and then. lol

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/24/2021 4:41:00 AM Nothing like a loving hug when life is posing hurdles. Well evoked, Virginia. Login to Reply Virginia Gelok Date: 10/24/2021 4:31:00 PM so true, hugs can fix a lot of woes. Thanks for your comment.