Stooping Low

Madonna swelling at the Kilmore, 
every girl a wisp of ungovernable smoke, 
and vomit on my shoes as they threw me 
out the door, addled and clueless as I was, 
and, forgive me, still am. 
I hit the tarmac like a warm can 
but you stood at the step 
and watched me breath, 
and would do it again. 
I was not swallowed by the dark 
completely. An addiction way past taming, 
you were a shocking case.
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Agustin Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 7:08 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 4:26 AM
Sad for the person living in this sad condition of life. Welcome to soup. Sara
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