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waves of ash in agonizing gaps at the water's edge They scream wildly like an anxious sea sprite, foaming out the, mysterious misery of mind On that terrible twilight the sun suffused irrated streaks with scorching sympathy to lift up a dejected sea I observed seas of silken saffron swelled in spunky surges! Written: August 21, 2022

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Date: 8/22/2022 7:20:00 PM
Beautiful seaside scene ! A metaphoric marvel.....! Love the expression......'seas of silken saffron'
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Date: 8/22/2022 6:43:00 AM
Joyous scene in splendid images, Lasaad.
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Date: 8/21/2022 8:52:00 PM
Dear Lasaad, vibrant imagery and beautiful alliteration flows with artistic delight from your golden pen. Splendid poetry, my friend. Indeed, your poem is metaphorically marvelous! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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