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Stony Swells

waves of ash
in agonizing gaps
at the water's edge
They scream wildly

like an anxious sea sprite, 
foaming out the,
mysterious misery of mind

On that terrible twilight
the sun suffused irrated streaks 

with scorching sympathy

to lift up a dejected sea

I observed
seas of silken saffron swelled in
spunky surges!

Written: August 21, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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George Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 7:20 PM
Beautiful seaside scene ! A metaphoric marvel.....! Love the expression......'seas of silken saffron'
Pandit Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 6:43 AM
Joyous scene in splendid images, Lasaad.
Ashley Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 8:52 PM
Dear Lasaad, vibrant imagery and beautiful alliteration flows with artistic delight from your golden pen. Splendid poetry, my friend. Indeed, your poem is metaphorically marvelous! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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