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Stoney Path

I've traveled a road - barefoot that's paved of spring stones Feeling that occasional lush of warmth on my callused feet. A chilling wind scales my shoulders, reminding me that I've been walking the cold of Winter. Bitter-sweet is the Winter sun, tearing through the snowy clouds with igniting rays that uncomfortably heat my cheeks. Flushed with the embarrassment of not knowing how to proceed, I lower my head, hiding my love-inflicted smile, and tread on the stoney path - barefoot and undesirably alone?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/12/2011 9:03:00 PM
VERY HARD DEEP PASSION... ENJOYED YOUR POEM,..P.D.
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Date: 3/11/2011 1:49:00 PM
Great one.. Congratulations on passing through first rounds....Sara
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Gavin. Love Carol
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Date: 12/7/2010 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations Gavin on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/13/2010 12:51:00 PM
Very awesome and ingruing thoughts you have penned on Stoney paTH, Gavin
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