Richard Lamoureux Poet I do not know?

Stone Rose Pilot

Ya call yerself Rose
But ya actually Vie
I'm left here ponderin
Wonderin why

Sure ya pretty
Rose suits ya fine
Complexity like wine
There's some fella
I'm sure ya left behind
Him a seven and you a nine

Yet I look
I ain't see no thorns
Even though petals of splendor adorn
A sweet child 
Canadian born
Who looks like a flower
In a field of corn

So you see
I'm here ta dis
I tink ya
A misrepresented flower miss
Or perhaps I mistaken
Ya might be a Mrs.
All I know
Is ya go around 
givin hugs and kisses
In the end 
I m a witness
Maybe it's none a ma business
It may just be ma inquisitiveness

Are ya sure
Ya not a Violet
Or tink perhaps
ya a disguised 
"Stone Cold Pilot"
Pretty with piercing eyes
And glamorous highlights
Writing rhymes in fluorescent red tights!
Keepin fellas up at night
I'm tellin ya
Dat aint right
Yer star
Otta sight
It's just way ta bright!



Getting in on the slam fun, dedicated to Rose!

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Verlena S. Walker February 23, 2015 at 10:17 PM Nicie nice Richard. I like... Rated 7 - Verlena

Charmaine Chircop February 21, 2015 at 9:31 AM I love our sweet Rose,and your poem slammed her in a delightful way.She is an amazing lady. Richard Lamoureux February 21, 2015 at 9:45 AM I agree, it seems I am surrounded by amazing women here at the soup!

Emile Pinet February 19, 2015 at 10:29 AM Your words play within our hearts and their magic comes alive. Well done. Emile. #7 Richard Lamoureux February 19, 2015 at 10:58 AM Thanks Emile!

Tim Ryerson February 19, 2015 at 10:23 AM 'I do not know' the form of this poem either but what a great (and funny) tribute to Vie! A real slam-banger of a poem. Ya somethun else Rose and so be you Richie... Richard Lamoureux February 19, 2015 at 11:00 AM Ha ha, I love your comment!

Connie Marcum Wong February 19, 2015 at 4:13 AM Richard, this is such a fun tribute to Vie. So it was supposed to be a slam? I am sure she won't take it that way! Richard Lamoureux February 19, 2015 at 8:12 AM More of a pseudo slam.

Eileen Manassian February 18, 2015 at 10:51 PM This is a lovely dedication. I'm with Andrea....This was no SLAM...This was praise. It is very beautiful. I read it before...but have come now to post a comment. Hugs Richard Lamoureux February 19, 2015 at 8:14 AM I agree it is to nice to be a slam, I can't be mean to people.

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2015 at 2:21 PM Hahahaha, GREAT tribute though in a slam form, I don'T take it as a slam!! You were very complimentary to this Soup ROSE. Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2015 at 9:27 PM I had fun with this one.

Ralph Sergi February 18, 2015 at 12:37 PM A great tribute to a beauty in any language. Great Write! Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2015 at 9:27 PM Thanks Ralph.

Monterey Sirak February 18, 2015 at 8:17 AM This one is fun! Great tribute. Vie is a rose, and violet, and daisy...all the beautiful blooms that soothe, amaze and entice us. Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2015 at 9:29 PM I agree.

Kp Nunez February 17, 2015 at 11:17 PM Ever too nice Richard, even with the slam. I'm on the sidelines, waiting for the next poet to come out with his/her own. Yes! Enjoying this immensely...I can see M. Rose did. Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2015 at 9:30 PM Thanks Kim.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 17, 2015 at 9:10 PM This is the sweetest slam I've ever read, Richard, and for such a sweet, smoochin' lady! So very cute...hugs, Rhonda Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2015 at 9:32 PM Thanks Rhonda. Hugs Back.

Paul Callus February 17, 2015 at 1:46 PM This is a most lovely write, Richard! If this is how slamming is, then I do not mind being slammed all the time! Vien is a lovely lady and an able writer. Now...careful...when you leave, don't slam the door:) // paul Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2015 at 9:36 PM Ha ha, thanks Paul.

Demetrios Trifiatis February 17, 2015 at 12:58 PM No matter what the form of language you mold it to beauty's commends, dear Richard! Impressive! Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2015 at 9:37 PM Thanks my friend.;0)

Poesy Relish February 17, 2015 at 10:35 AM good one Richard... would like to see how Vie is gonna react... nad! Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2015 at 9:41 PM She had a great response, see up above.

Neva Romaine February 17, 2015 at 9:51 AM Hey Richard, this is a wonderful piece. I can hear the accent! A great expression from you. Be Blessed, Neva Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2015 at 9:43 PM Thanks for the visit and blessing.