Stone Rose Pilot

Ya call yerself Rose
But ya actually Vie
I'm left here ponderin
Wonderin why

Sure ya pretty
Rose suits ya fine
Complexity like wine
There's some fella
I'm sure ya left behind
Him a seven and you a nine

Yet I look
I ain't see no thorns
Even though petals of splendor adorn
A sweet child 
Canadian born
Who looks like a flower
In a field of corn

So you see
I'm here ta dis
I tink ya
A misrepresented flower miss
Or perhaps I mistaken
Ya might be a Mrs.
All I know
Is ya go around 
givin hugs and kisses
In the end 
I m a witness
Maybe it's none a ma business
It may just be ma inquisitiveness

Are ya sure
Ya not a Violet
Or tink perhaps
ya a disguised 
"Stone Cold Pilot"
Pretty with piercing eyes
And glamorous highlights
Writing rhymes in fluorescent red tights!
Keepin fellas up at night
I'm tellin ya
Dat aint right
Yer star
Otta sight
It's just way ta bright!



Getting in on the slam fun, dedicated to Rose!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/23/2015 10:17:00 PM
Nicie nice Richard. I like... Rated 7 - Verlena
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Date: 2/21/2015 9:31:00 AM
I love our sweet Rose,and your poem slammed her in a delightful way.She is an amazing lady.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/21/2015 9:45:00 AM
I agree, it seems I am surrounded by amazing women here at the soup!
Date: 2/19/2015 10:29:00 AM
Your words play within our hearts and their magic comes alive. Well done. Emile. #7
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/19/2015 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Emile!
Date: 2/19/2015 10:23:00 AM
'I do not know' the form of this poem either but what a great (and funny) tribute to Vie! A real slam-banger of a poem. Ya somethun else Rose and so be you Richie...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/19/2015 11:00:00 AM
Ha ha, I love your comment!
Date: 2/19/2015 4:13:00 AM
Richard, this is such a fun tribute to Vie. So it was supposed to be a slam? I am sure she won't take it that way!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/19/2015 8:12:00 AM
More of a pseudo slam.
Date: 2/18/2015 10:51:00 PM
This is a lovely dedication. I'm with Andrea....This was no SLAM...This was praise. It is very beautiful. I read it before...but have come now to post a comment. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/19/2015 8:14:00 AM
I agree it is to nice to be a slam, I can't be mean to people.
Date: 2/18/2015 2:21:00 PM
Hahahaha, GREAT tribute though in a slam form, I don'T take it as a slam!! You were very complimentary to this Soup ROSE.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2015 9:27:00 PM
I had fun with this one.
Date: 2/18/2015 12:37:00 PM
A great tribute to a beauty in any language. Great Write!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2015 9:27:00 PM
Thanks Ralph.
Date: 2/18/2015 8:17:00 AM
This one is fun! Great tribute. Vie is a rose, and violet, and daisy...all the beautiful blooms that soothe, amaze and entice us.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2015 9:29:00 PM
I agree.
Date: 2/17/2015 11:17:00 PM
Ever too nice Richard, even with the slam. I'm on the sidelines, waiting for the next poet to come out with his/her own. Yes! Enjoying this immensely...I can see M. Rose did.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2015 9:30:00 PM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 2/17/2015 9:10:00 PM
This is the sweetest slam I've ever read, Richard, and for such a sweet, smoochin' lady! So very cute...hugs, Rhonda
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2015 9:32:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda. Hugs Back.
Date: 2/17/2015 1:46:00 PM
This is a most lovely write, Richard! If this is how slamming is, then I do not mind being slammed all the time! Vien is a lovely lady and an able writer. Now...careful...when you leave, don't slam the door:) // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2015 9:36:00 PM
Ha ha, thanks Paul.
Date: 2/17/2015 12:58:00 PM
No matter what the form of language you mold it to beauty's commends, dear Richard! Impressive!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2015 9:37:00 PM
Thanks my friend.;0)
Date: 2/17/2015 10:35:00 AM
good one Richard... would like to see how Vie is gonna react... nad!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2015 9:41:00 PM
She had a great response, see up above.
Date: 2/17/2015 9:51:00 AM
Hey Richard, this is a wonderful piece. I can hear the accent! A great expression from you. Be Blessed, Neva
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2015 9:43:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and blessing.
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