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Stone Cold In Love

saturday morning nothing to do just lie in bed and think of you think about your pretty face wishing you were here in place lots of time i spend with you and you unknowing have no clue like a convicted man i have no choice i listen to an inner voice it tells me where my eye's would wander and thinks of pleasant things to ponder wishing things were this way or that could i pet you like a cat i close my eyes and hope to dream a vision of love a passionate scene but with shyness i plot my next move when can i next be with you i think about the things we do searching each moment for ALL loves clues never a touch or sweet word go by without close examination or my asking why like star gazers gazing at the stars i try to predict my future and make it where you are dare i ask my God what i should say because of you He has lacked my praise i go on like this for days and days writing my little stories pretending in my plays when someones in love with you they think of you just the way i do i try not to waste my days and nights the way of love is a constant figtht but if i should chose an ordinary life and end my joy and strife then would be no reason for life no reason for struggle no putting in pieces of a puzzle no reason for waking on saturdays alone my reasons for living all gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/5/2010 5:31:00 AM
Wow you really like this person! Great write!
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Date: 3/17/2010 8:52:00 PM
Yes, love can open up many new feelings. You have to take the moment and go for it. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/14/2010 5:06:00 AM
The worse that could happen is that she could say NO. If together you are meant to be, God will take you there together...in a holy way. Then, it's win! Win! God be with you and help you with your life choices. Stay in touch. (I thought you should know that I listen to your Valentine phone message from time to time...Your voice keeps me cheery.) May God, now make your life cheery. You deserve joy because you give joy. Agape as John Moses Freeman says! Dane Ann
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Date: 3/9/2010 3:19:00 PM
Have you asked her out? I hope so! Light & Love
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Date: 3/1/2010 2:45:00 PM
How i can relate to this John. One i would have like to have written!
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:04:00 PM
A wonderful description of a poet in luv.. and such lovely words for a special lucky lady... an amazing write John and so enjoyable to read your passionate and emotional words tonight.. going to make it a new favorite of mine... its a special write indeed.. thankxxx for sharing this "beauty" ..luv.. "Sweetheart"... I posted a new blog tonight about the problems the soup site was having last night if u care to comment .. thankxxx..luv..
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Date: 2/27/2010 6:23:00 PM
Wow! I did not know that that is how men think.....Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem "The Questioner". Sara
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Date: 2/27/2010 6:06:00 PM
enjoyed reading today! I am glad you are in love. Love is a splendorous thing.
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Date: 2/27/2010 5:02:00 PM
Like Karen said, John, 'So much truth in your words'. I wish your dreams become a reality and both of you are happy in love! Makes sure she reads this!! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/27/2010 10:29:00 AM
You must love this woman John..Hope she feels the same way too,cos this lady is very lucky to have such love..beautiful are your words..Hope you are fine too..Charma
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Date: 2/27/2010 8:03:00 AM
Indeed, these are the thoughts of one who is truly in love, John. Very romantic write! Much love to you, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:51:00 AM
Very beautiful poem .A wonderful poem to read on this beautiful SATURDAY morning. Enjoyed reading...
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