Get Your Premium Membership

Stone Cold In Love

saturday morning
nothing to do
just lie in bed 
and think of you

think about your 
pretty face
wishing you were
here in place

lots of time
i spend with you
and you unknowing
have no clue

like a convicted man
i have no choice
i listen to 
an inner voice

it tells me where
my eye's would wander
and thinks of pleasant
things to ponder

wishing things were
this way or that
could i pet you 
like a cat

i close my eyes
and hope to dream
a vision of love
a passionate scene

but with shyness
i plot my next move
when can i next
be with you

i think about 
the things we do
searching each moment
for ALL loves clues

never a touch
or sweet word go by
without close examination
or my asking why

like star gazers
gazing at the stars
i try to predict my future
and make it where you are

dare i ask my God
what i should say
because of you 
He has lacked my praise

i go on like this
for days and days
writing my little stories
pretending in my plays

when someones 
in love with you
they think of you 
just the way i do

i try not to waste
my days and nights
the way of love
is a constant figtht

but if i should chose 
an ordinary life
and end my joy and strife
then would be no reason 
for life

no reason for struggle
no putting in pieces of a puzzle
no reason for waking
on saturdays alone

my reasons for living
all gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/5/2010 5:31:00 AM
Wow you really like this person! Great write!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/17/2010 8:52:00 PM
Yes, love can open up many new feelings. You have to take the moment and go for it. God Bless Phyl
Login to Reply
Date: 3/14/2010 5:06:00 AM
The worse that could happen is that she could say NO. If together you are meant to be, God will take you there together...in a holy way. Then, it's win! Win! God be with you and help you with your life choices. Stay in touch. (I thought you should know that I listen to your Valentine phone message from time to time...Your voice keeps me cheery.) May God, now make your life cheery. You deserve joy because you give joy. Agape as John Moses Freeman says! Dane Ann
Login to Reply
Date: 3/9/2010 3:19:00 PM
Have you asked her out? I hope so! Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 3/1/2010 2:45:00 PM
How i can relate to this John. One i would have like to have written!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/27/2010 7:04:00 PM
A wonderful description of a poet in luv.. and such lovely words for a special lucky lady... an amazing write John and so enjoyable to read your passionate and emotional words tonight.. going to make it a new favorite of mine... its a special write indeed.. thankxxx for sharing this "beauty" ..luv.. "Sweetheart"... I posted a new blog tonight about the problems the soup site was having last night if u care to comment .. thankxxx..luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/27/2010 6:23:00 PM
Wow! I did not know that that is how men think.....Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem "The Questioner". Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 2/27/2010 6:06:00 PM
enjoyed reading today! I am glad you are in love. Love is a splendorous thing.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/27/2010 5:02:00 PM
Like Karen said, John, 'So much truth in your words'. I wish your dreams become a reality and both of you are happy in love! Makes sure she reads this!! Peace, Audrey
Login to Reply
Date: 2/27/2010 10:29:00 AM
You must love this woman John..Hope she feels the same way too,cos this lady is very lucky to have such love..beautiful are your words..Hope you are fine too..Charma
Login to Reply
Date: 2/27/2010 8:03:00 AM
Indeed, these are the thoughts of one who is truly in love, John. Very romantic write! Much love to you, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 2/27/2010 7:51:00 AM
Very beautiful poem .A wonderful poem to read on this beautiful SATURDAY morning. Enjoyed reading...
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things