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Stone Chalice


Hands of jagged cliffs
Reach to cup clear mountain wine
Earthly communion




for Raul's contest - Rhythm of the Falls

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Skat A

May 12, 2015 at 1:32 PM

ABE, LOVE THE WAY YOU DRESSED NATURE...... ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT

Andrew Crisci

November 17, 2009 at 8:53 AM

Congratulations on your first win in this challenging contest. This a very inspirational Haiku. Enjoy your honor. Warmest regards, Andrew.

Audrey Haick

November 5, 2009 at 9:37 PM

Congratulations Abe! Great job! Peace, Audrey

Pamela Griffiths

October 31, 2009 at 10:25 AM

Congratulations Abe, well done. Pam.

Brandee Augustus

October 27, 2009 at 12:46 PM

I had a oooooh and ah ha moment with this one! I love the "clear mountain wine"? It made me kind of thirsty, which is quite good for someone who doesn't drink! Congratulations on your deserved first place win!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 23, 2009 at 4:25 AM

Congratulations, Abe, on placing Raul's picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

John Loving Iii

October 22, 2009 at 4:37 PM

the earth has it's it's pleasures as we have ours. jhl

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

October 22, 2009 at 8:58 AM

Dear Abe, Congratulations on YOUR Very well deserved first place Win in Raul's Contest YOU are an inspiation to the site ALWAYS...HG

Sue Mason

October 19, 2009 at 5:01 PM

Good luck in the contest, Abe. This is beautiful.

Marty Owens

October 19, 2009 at 8:54 AM

This was wonderful Abe...Congratulations...Marty

Laurie Ginn

October 18, 2009 at 9:34 PM

What a beautiful picture you just painted in my head. There's no such thing as 'mere' words

Audrey Haick

October 18, 2009 at 9:22 PM

Congratulations, Abe!! Fantastic imagery!! Peace, Audrey

Ismael Nieves

October 18, 2009 at 7:35 PM

FELICITATIONS on your first place win in Raul's contest. Extremely beautiful poem.

Carolyn Devonshire

October 17, 2009 at 4:41 PM

Congratulations, Abe! I'm not suprised Raul selected this for first place in his contest. Love, Carolyn

Cecil Hickman

October 17, 2009 at 1:30 PM

Congratulations this indeed is a brilliant Haiku with amazing vision and more,,blessings..Cecil

Sean Kelly

October 17, 2009 at 4:07 AM

Congrats , Abe , well done ....

Brian Strand

October 17, 2009 at 2:33 AM

Congrats on your success in the contest Abe.Rgds Brian

Joyce Johnson

October 16, 2009 at 11:49 PM

Very novel and new view of the beautiful scene. Congratulations on your win. Joyce

Donna Golden

October 16, 2009 at 10:05 PM

Breathtaking, refreshing, gorgeous. No wonder this won first place! Congratulations, Abe! Hugs, Donna

Elaine George

October 16, 2009 at 7:36 PM

Dear Abe, I knew this was #1. Congratulations on this MASTERPIECE. Love, Lainie

Doris Culverhouse

October 16, 2009 at 7:28 PM

nicely penned, congrats on the big win!!

Carrie Richards

October 16, 2009 at 4:21 PM

What a wonderful depiction of that lovely water fall!! Loved this...and well deserving this first place honor!! Congratulations Abe on this beautiful poem! ~ Love, Carrie