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Stone Chalice

Hands of jagged cliffs Reach to cup clear mountain wine Earthly communion
for Raul's contest - Rhythm of the Falls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/12/2015 1:32:00 PM
ABE, LOVE THE WAY YOU DRESSED NATURE...... ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT
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Date: 11/17/2009 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your first win in this challenging contest. This a very inspirational Haiku. Enjoy your honor. Warmest regards, Andrew.
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Date: 11/5/2009 9:37:00 PM
Congratulations Abe! Great job! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 10/31/2009 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations Abe, well done. Pam.
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Date: 10/27/2009 12:46:00 PM
I had a oooooh and ah ha moment with this one! I love the "clear mountain wine"? It made me kind of thirsty, which is quite good for someone who doesn't drink! Congratulations on your deserved first place win!
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Date: 10/23/2009 4:25:00 AM
Congratulations, Abe, on placing Raul's picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J
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Date: 10/22/2009 4:37:00 PM
the earth has it's it's pleasures as we have ours. jhl
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Date: 10/22/2009 8:58:00 AM
Dear Abe, Congratulations on YOUR Very well deserved first place Win in Raul's Contest YOU are an inspiation to the site ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 10/19/2009 5:01:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, Abe. This is beautiful.
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Date: 10/19/2009 8:54:00 AM
This was wonderful Abe...Congratulations...Marty
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Date: 10/18/2009 9:34:00 PM
What a beautiful picture you just painted in my head. There's no such thing as 'mere' words
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Date: 10/18/2009 9:22:00 PM
Congratulations, Abe!! Fantastic imagery!! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 10/18/2009 7:35:00 PM
FELICITATIONS on your first place win in Raul's contest. Extremely beautiful poem.
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Date: 10/17/2009 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations, Abe! I'm not suprised Raul selected this for first place in his contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/17/2009 1:30:00 PM
Congratulations this indeed is a brilliant Haiku with amazing vision and more,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 10/17/2009 4:07:00 AM
Congrats , Abe , well done ....
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Date: 10/17/2009 2:33:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the contest Abe.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/16/2009 11:49:00 PM
Very novel and new view of the beautiful scene. Congratulations on your win. Joyce
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Date: 10/16/2009 10:05:00 PM
Breathtaking, refreshing, gorgeous. No wonder this won first place! Congratulations, Abe! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/16/2009 7:36:00 PM
Dear Abe, I knew this was #1. Congratulations on this MASTERPIECE. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/16/2009 7:28:00 PM
nicely penned, congrats on the big win!!
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Date: 10/16/2009 4:21:00 PM
What a wonderful depiction of that lovely water fall!! Loved this...and well deserving this first place honor!! Congratulations Abe on this beautiful poem! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/16/2009 4:13:00 PM
Congratulations on very 1st Place WIN with this excellent piece! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:32:00 PM
Wonderful viewpoint! Beautiful imagery! Congrautulations on your first place win! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Abe. Love, Carol
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