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Stone Chalice


Hands of jagged cliffs
Reach to cup clear mountain wine
Earthly communion




for Raul's contest - Rhythm of the Falls

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Skat A

Date: 5/12/2015 1:32:00 PM

ABE, LOVE THE WAY YOU DRESSED NATURE...... ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT

Andrew Crisci

Date: 11/17/2009 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your first win in this challenging contest. This a very inspirational Haiku. Enjoy your honor. Warmest regards, Andrew.

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/5/2009 9:37:00 PM

Congratulations Abe! Great job! Peace, Audrey

Pamela Griffiths

Date: 10/31/2009 10:25:00 AM

Congratulations Abe, well done. Pam.

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/27/2009 12:46:00 PM

I had a oooooh and ah ha moment with this one! I love the "clear mountain wine"? It made me kind of thirsty, which is quite good for someone who doesn't drink! Congratulations on your deserved first place win!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/23/2009 4:25:00 AM

Congratulations, Abe, on placing Raul's picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/22/2009 4:37:00 PM

the earth has it's it's pleasures as we have ours. jhl

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/22/2009 8:58:00 AM

Dear Abe, Congratulations on YOUR Very well deserved first place Win in Raul's Contest YOU are an inspiation to the site ALWAYS...HG

Sue Mason

Date: 10/19/2009 5:01:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, Abe. This is beautiful.

Marty Owens

Date: 10/19/2009 8:54:00 AM

This was wonderful Abe...Congratulations...Marty

Laurie Ginn

Date: 10/18/2009 9:34:00 PM

What a beautiful picture you just painted in my head. There's no such thing as 'mere' words

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/18/2009 9:22:00 PM

Congratulations, Abe!! Fantastic imagery!! Peace, Audrey

Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/18/2009 7:35:00 PM

FELICITATIONS on your first place win in Raul's contest. Extremely beautiful poem.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/17/2009 4:41:00 PM

Congratulations, Abe! I'm not suprised Raul selected this for first place in his contest. Love, Carolyn

Cecil Hickman

Date: 10/17/2009 1:30:00 PM

Congratulations this indeed is a brilliant Haiku with amazing vision and more,,blessings..Cecil

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/17/2009 4:07:00 AM

Congrats , Abe , well done ....

Brian Strand

Date: 10/17/2009 2:33:00 AM

Congrats on your success in the contest Abe.Rgds Brian

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/16/2009 11:49:00 PM

Very novel and new view of the beautiful scene. Congratulations on your win. Joyce

Donna Golden

Date: 10/16/2009 10:05:00 PM

Breathtaking, refreshing, gorgeous. No wonder this won first place! Congratulations, Abe! Hugs, Donna

Elaine George

Date: 10/16/2009 7:36:00 PM

Dear Abe, I knew this was #1. Congratulations on this MASTERPIECE. Love, Lainie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/16/2009 7:28:00 PM

nicely penned, congrats on the big win!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/16/2009 4:21:00 PM

What a wonderful depiction of that lovely water fall!! Loved this...and well deserving this first place honor!! Congratulations Abe on this beautiful poem! ~ Love, Carrie

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/16/2009 4:13:00 PM

Congratulations on very 1st Place WIN with this excellent piece! Love, Robin