Paula Swanson Poet Haiku

Stone Bowl

Stone bowl, worn with age
                full from last nights rain
                          quenches a birds thirst



Paula Swanson

For the contest:  
An Haiku From Your Window
Sponsored by:  Michael Falotico
Placement: 9th

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 23, 2011 at 5:46 AM Belated congratulations on your placement Paula, in the contest "An Haiku From Your Window" sponsored by Michael J. Falotico. Love, Carol

John Freeman February 13, 2011 at 2:30 PM Congratulations Paula on your worthy poem's honered place. Agape, Moses

Elaine George February 9, 2011 at 4:18 AM Love this sensational Haiku, Paula. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Tahera Mannan February 8, 2011 at 8:07 PM Super image Paula. Many congratulations for this win.

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2011 at 2:54 PM Oh, I love how you focused right on the center of what stole the show in your yard.So cute!! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico February 8, 2011 at 2:33 PM I feel that image so strongly, thank you so much for entrering my contest... so enjoyed..love Michael

Kory Calhoun February 8, 2011 at 9:22 AM Very nice, Paula - CONGRATULATIONS on your BIG WIN in Michael's contest. Best wishes, KC

Carolyn Devonshire February 8, 2011 at 9:09 AM Great image of the birds finding nourishment from the rain caught in the stone bowl, Paula. Congrats on your win. Best wishes, Carolyn

Carrie Richards February 8, 2011 at 8:34 AM Love this one....a focus on a single item, this is brilliant!! :)

Debbie Guzzi February 8, 2011 at 7:23 AM very asian feeling! loved the cut. Congrad's Light & Love

Sara Kendrick February 8, 2011 at 7:14 AM Good one..Enjoyed..Congratulations on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 8, 2011 at 4:40 AM Congrats Paula on your wonderful win in Michael's Haiku from my window contest with this per4fect write my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Robert Pettit February 8, 2011 at 3:06 AM Paula, congratulations on winning with this entry. I wonder why nobody has commented on this one before me?