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INSPIRED BY the movie “ROB ROY” starring Liam Neeson

They marched in like they owned the place In uniforms, formidable and menacing Bereft, looking around with hostility Bayonets in hand, immutable in their stance They pillaged what was not theirs She was lumped in their vicious interlude So enraged was she, her body lay brittle Taken by force, abused and humiliated A reluctant starlet in a morbid sketch seeming to last forever When the men left, there was a short tenuous instant But she picked up her courage With her scattered clothes Made her way to the shore Demurely walked waist deep into the sea To wash away the last traces of disgrace Determined that their assault would not last a minute longer Chalked it up to being just another victim, another statistic Life would go on, she would turn the page Refusing to sacrifice the rest of her life With another thought of this gruesome ordeal Refusing to be a victim for a moment longer Not giving them the satisfaction Submitted on October 20, 2017 for contest EIGHT-WORD CHALLENGE sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 11/4/2017 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations and well done.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/4/2017 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Lin. Have an awesome day!
Date: 11/3/2017 8:53:00 PM
Well done Line, a very powerful write, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 11/4/2017 8:40:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your visit and comment. Have a wonderful day!
Date: 10/20/2017 3:46:00 PM
I can't imagine the horror of enduring something like this and the courage it takes to move on. A powerful description!!!
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Date: 10/20/2017 5:08:00 PM
Thanks Mike. It was a very powerful scene in the movie ROB ROY. Quite unforgettable.
Date: 10/20/2017 3:43:00 PM
Hi Line, You did a good job with the eight words. I could just picture the whole scene. I am compelled to watch the movie. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest :-) Alexis
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Date: 10/20/2017 5:13:00 PM
Hi Alexis, I highly recommend the movie. The main star is Liam Neeson. My husband and I have watched the movie several times - it's so powerful. I'd love to hear back from you about it.
Date: 10/20/2017 11:16:00 AM
Makes me think of the women coming forward in Hollywood.
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Date: 10/20/2017 11:53:00 AM
Bravery takes many forms. Thanks for your visit.

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