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INSPIRED BY the movie “ROB ROY” starring Liam Neeson

Stoic

They marched in like they owned the place
In uniforms, formidable and menacing
Bereft, looking around with hostility
Bayonets in hand, immutable in their stance

They pillaged what was not theirs
She was lumped in their vicious interlude
So enraged was she, her body lay brittle
Taken by force, abused and humiliated

A reluctant starlet in a morbid sketch seeming to last forever
When the men left, there was a short tenuous instant
But she picked up her courage
With her scattered clothes

Made her way to the shore
Demurely walked waist deep into the sea
To wash away the last traces of disgrace
Determined that their assault would not last a minute longer

Chalked it up to being just another victim, another statistic
Life would go on, she would turn the page
Refusing to sacrifice the rest of her life
With another thought of this gruesome ordeal

Refusing to be a victim for a moment longer
Not giving them the satisfaction



AP: 3rd place 2025

Submitted on October 20, 2017 for contest EIGHT-WORD CHALLENGE sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON  -  RANKED 3RD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lane Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Congratulations and well done.
Gauthier Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 9:08 AM
Thanks Lin. Have an awesome day!
Hamilton Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 8:53 PM
Well done Line, a very powerful write, congrats on a fine win!
Gauthier Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 8:40 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your visit and comment. Have a wonderful day!
Gentile Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 3:46 PM
I can't imagine the horror of enduring something like this and the courage it takes to move on. A powerful description!!!
Gauthier Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 5:08 PM
Thanks Mike. It was a very powerful scene in the movie ROB ROY. Quite unforgettable.
Y. Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 3:43 PM
Hi Line, You did a good job with the eight words. I could just picture the whole scene. I am compelled to watch the movie. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest :-) Alexis
Gauthier Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 5:13 PM
Hi Alexis, I highly recommend the movie. The main star is Liam Neeson. My husband and I have watched the movie several times - it's so powerful. I'd love to hear back from you about it.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 11:16 AM
Makes me think of the women coming forward in Hollywood.
Gauthier Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 11:53 AM
Bravery takes many forms. Thanks for your visit.
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