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Stitched In Heaven

Sifting streams of gold through my hands Sapphire strewn sands from distant lands Lusty ambition's avaricious reach All together rise up to teach -- Polished silver is shiny; bronze basks in the sun But humble deeds, stitched in Heaven Of Eternity are spun

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Date: 6/22/2019 6:19:00 AM
A lovely read my friend...heavenly said...^WW^
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Date: 6/21/2019 12:27:00 PM
The frailty of human beings can easily allow us to fall prey to praise and outward glitter, but common sense (as shown in this poem) talks a different language! It would be wise to heed the message of the end lines. Regards // paul
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/21/2019 1:16:00 PM
Thank you for your insightful comment and your kind words about the last few lines. Greatly appreciated, Paul. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 6/21/2019 10:46:00 AM
Great one, GW Panagiota
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/21/2019 11:24:00 AM
Thank you so much for the nice compliment, Panagiota. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 6/21/2019 6:54:00 AM
I believe that humble deeds are the most rewarded in heaven.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/21/2019 11:22:00 AM
I believe that you are right, and I hope so: As it should be. :) gw
Date: 6/21/2019 4:54:00 AM
Lovely, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/21/2019 11:22:00 AM
TYSM, Line.
Date: 6/21/2019 12:26:00 AM
yeah; humble; gentle, modest.....deeds indeed stitched in Heaven of eternity/// beautiful poetic expression
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/21/2019 11:22:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Mahtab. Greatly appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon

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