Jerry T Curtis Poet Rhyme

Stirring the Pot

I'm ready for my soup, please tell me Mama
What's you're gonna add to make it good
I hope you put in just a pinch, of rhyme
And a half of cup of wit, if you would

You know I like to watch it as it bubbles
But I think, you should cook it really slow
"Cause when it burns, on the very bottom
I have to shut my eyes and hold my nose

I know that you know, that I'm hungry
and making tasty soup will take some time
So, please let me stir it very slowly
While I sneak in, just another pinch of rhyme

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Pandita Sietesantos July 11, 2015 at 5:41 PM I am a soup lover and I love this one! I also love the "pinch of rhyme" which is a wonderful ingredient to add that would make it taste soooo good! It's a 7 from me and have a wonderful weekend! Pandita.

Gary Bateman June 23, 2015 at 8:38 AM Hello Jerry!! Way to go here. I like your metaphor very much on "Stirring The Pot." A nice write here my good friend. A "7" too for sure. Best Always, Gary Jerry T Curtis June 23, 2015 at 3:40 PM Thanks Gary, and much success to you

Emile Pinet June 22, 2015 at 5:22 PM Very well said with grace, humor and intent. Very imaginative use of words and skillfully constructed. "cook really it slow" typo Jerry T Curtis June 23, 2015 at 3:39 PM Thanks Emile, those typos eh

Jan Allison June 22, 2015 at 4:02 PM lol love it Jerry - as you know my poems are a load of poop - do you want to add that to the mix lol:-) hugs Jan xx 7 Jerry T Curtis June 23, 2015 at 3:45 PM Thanks Jan but I have my own recipe for poop soup, all you have to do is read some of my s*** to know that's true. lol God Bless