Stinking

stinking scent of peach spray 'pon trees in springtime... pink chablis dazzles Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi Contest: Spring Into Haiku Written: May 05, 2014

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Jack Horne

Date: 3/22/2019 3:11:00 PM

could imagine this

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/22/2019 6:42:00 PM

Jack, Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2014 9:06:00 PM

Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/16/2014 4:56:00 PM

I felt bad for you smelling that Sarah but I pictured you drinking bubbling enjoying the scene if not the smell LOL Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda Jackson

Date: 5/16/2014 7:46:00 AM

I like your poem and its uniqueness. Best wishes Linda x

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 5/16/2014 7:44:00 AM

Wonderful! Congratulations on your win! Lori

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2014 9:14:00 PM

awesome win, Sara. Congrats to you.

Daver Austin

Date: 5/9/2014 11:31:00 AM

Lots of taste and aroma in this one. Love, daver A toast to spring, eh?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2014 11:22:00 PM

Sara, i don't mind the smell...enjoyed the haiku...Linda

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/5/2014 5:54:00 PM

Hi Sara, Wonderful write! You make writing seem so effortless and easy. Such talent:~) Will be cheering for you in the contest and I appreciate the time you take to stop by, Peace, Deborah

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2014 5:42:00 PM

The title is funny!! Do they really smell that bad, Sara?? but they sure sound pretty.

Neelam Sangwai

Date: 5/5/2014 12:43:00 PM

Beautiful...... !Expression.