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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Stillness Surrounds

Red earth, ancient rocks
A steel gray sky infusing
Soundless reflections.


© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
February 14, 2010
Poetic Form: Haiku

Copyright © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen | Year Posted 2010

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February 28, 2010 at 4:41 AM

Just beautiful Dane Ann >> James

February 22, 2010 at 6:51 PM

congratulations on win Dane hope for many more

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2010 at 5:27 PM

Just now seeing the winners of THIS one. Congrats on your BIG win! andrea

Iolanda Scripca

February 20, 2010 at 2:20 AM

Beautiful haiku, dear Dane Ann. I like the "soundless reflection". Congratulations for a well deserved first place. Thank you for your comment. I feel Glorious now :) Love, Iolanda

February 19, 2010 at 9:45 PM

tranquil silence but capturing words to honor their existence. Really a winner on this, Dane Ann. Congratulations. (^_^) Noel.

February 19, 2010 at 4:05 PM

Dane~Ann Congratulations on your first place win!! Love Laura :)

February 19, 2010 at 1:23 PM

Congratulations! This is a very lovely Haiku. -Mike

February 19, 2010 at 10:23 AM

Congratulations on a wonderful Haiku and a first place win, well deserved. Caryl

Carrie Richards

February 19, 2010 at 8:10 AM

1st place!! Congratulations to you Dane Anne. Well deserved, and enjoy this honor! ~ Carrie

Constance La France

February 19, 2010 at 6:46 AM

Congratulations on first place !!!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 19, 2010 at 6:36 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest (Morning Ambiance) Dane Ann. Love, Carol

February 19, 2010 at 6:31 AM

Congratulations Dane Ann...Beautiful Haiku...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 19, 2010 at 4:24 AM

Congrats on your 1st placw WIN in the Morning Ambiance contest.. a wonderful description of the photo exactly.. enjoy .. luv.. Linda-Marie..

February 19, 2010 at 4:16 AM

Congrats ! you've captured the scene just right

February 19, 2010 at 2:34 AM

Picture converted to great Haiku words , DA . Well done on your deserved win ....

Margaret Foster

February 19, 2010 at 12:34 AM

A worthy winner Dane Ann. The words compliment the picture perfectly. well done...love Margaret

February 18, 2010 at 9:37 PM

DASJ, congratulations in winning my contest...Raul

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 16, 2010 at 1:11 AM

Your first lines sets the tone perfectly, really enjoyed this haiku Dane-Ann :) Thanks as well for all your comments :)

February 15, 2010 at 4:25 PM

DASJ, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul

Andrea Dietrich

February 15, 2010 at 3:14 PM

wow, this is a great haiku, Dane Ann, and thanks for your comments on Cinder Girl. Luv, Andrea

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