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I was a learned meteorologist, studying azure atmosphere and vivid weather, To give a prophetic daily forecast, like bees gliding remote locales of heather. Often I had to issue advisories and warnings, like a jumbo roar of yellow lion, So plans could be made and trouble avoided, until a new, lemon-gold horizon. I also gathered much data to share, like enlightening ambles in green nature, Where each beauty bloom's a true eyeopener, maroon scented ones so major! Forests wore foxgloves, freesia and forget-me-nots, and friends came to call, In days that died a smoky orange, after the summertime slow, colorful crawl. I enjoyed being prepared for weather, like flaming sunset, redbird migrations, When frisky squirrels are hoarding acorns, and trees wear colorful variations. My fond family members were foodies, in backyard barbecues of blossoming, Each magenta time, memory in the making, like lily scent, an awesome thing! I lived in the house of raptness, and change trended by every glazed window, In the bold, fashionable colors of the day, like a dappled dawn's dreamy intro. Sparklers glittered like astral sapphires, at noisy, confetti street celebrations. Like seagulls screeching flight elation, or cheerful crickets' twilight jubilations! Narrative neighbors nibbled nectarines, when ruddy, amber nights were new, Always willing to lend an attentive ear, or to express the fervent point of view. Like the wide river that ponders the falls, before remarking in the hiss of mist; Or as a dreamless moon ponders all night, until dying from plum, sunrise kiss. Sultry summer had come at last, a laughing guest at every door and window; Like scents drifting everyplace at once, until black shrouded moon, the widow. One day the wind was absolutely relentless, whipping me anywhere I turned; And when my favorite hat was lost in gales, for wild winds to die, I yearned! Then came a sudden hush and the stillness, like being engulfed in coral mist. Though it's lovely, vague unease persists, for the exotic sights we've missed! No sweet wind to tickle and caress, nor an overbearing one to push and pull; Like lemony skies bereft of sunshine, and of mellowed clouds like lambs' wool. The tragedy of summer was unfolding fast, to my grief and passionate regret; And I fervently wished I'd never had the wish, like gold noon, not arrived yet. Time promptly skipped a rhythmic beat, and breezes played in my hair again; Like an old friend you're elated to see, coming down familiar, Old Rose Lane!

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Date: 11/30/2023 5:25:00 PM
Always wondered about the sound of stillness.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/1/2023 4:05:00 PM
It gets pretty loud, in the absence of a noise loved and familiar. :)
Date: 10/11/2023 12:54:00 PM
- Beautiful in blazing sunsets and yellow lions - When the seagulls scream: it means rain and storms, say the old and wise :) - I really enjoy reading this, Evelyn :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/11/2023 8:17:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise. So thrilled that you liked my tale. :)
Date: 10/8/2023 7:09:00 AM
Absolute masterpiece! I was captured visually by every elongated, elegant image, soared and sang like a bird in the high and bright expanse of enchantingly musical lyrics. You get a FAV! from me. Blessings.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/8/2023 10:36:00 AM
Your words are so elating, Joe. Thank you very much for your inspiriting comments, and for the joy of your FAV. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this tale. Blessings.
Date: 10/7/2023 8:23:00 PM
so beautifully penned Evelyn, enjoyed the moment, have a sweet sunday yann
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/8/2023 10:31:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comments and well wishes, Yann. I hope your day is nice, too.
Date: 10/7/2023 7:34:00 PM
Hi Evelyn, Glad to take this trip down "familiar, Old Rose Lane // in backyard barbecues of blossoming, Each magenta time, memory in the making". Just the nicest summer places you take us in 'Stillness'. -Richard
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/7/2023 8:10:00 PM
Thank you so much for the happy thoughts, Richard. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this tale. :)
Date: 10/7/2023 1:49:00 PM
Quite the storyteller you are with some awesome alliteration sprinkled throughout. Your weather references make us believe you really were a weatherman, er, lady
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/7/2023 8:08:00 PM
Thank you for your very nice remarks, Tom. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this tale. Best of wishes. :)
Date: 10/7/2023 10:14:00 AM
This is truly exceptional and beautiful dear Evelyn - full of so much vivid imagery brought to life by incredibly, vivid colour! Glorious. There is so much captured here within all the lines ‘’lemon - gold horizon’’a smoky orange’’ like lilly scent’ ‘ plum sunrise kiss’. Stunning imagery goes on and on. Wonderfully creative. So enjoyed it my lovely poetic friend. Inspiring. Much blessings, hugs and smiles to you x :):)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/7/2023 12:55:00 PM
I much appreciate your very nice remarks, Christina. It's such delight to know you enjoyed this tale. I hope your day is wonderful. Blessings and hugs and smiles to you, also. x :):)
Date: 10/7/2023 5:49:00 AM
Absolutely stunning write! Your use of colors here to paint imagery truly blew me away and left me in awe! So captivating as every line conveys so much! Soul warming too how descriptive this write is! Left my heart full and beaming! Definitely a fave for me this is
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/7/2023 12:47:00 PM
Thank you so much for your thrilling comments, and for your fave, Ink. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this poem. Kindest regards
Date: 10/7/2023 5:22:00 AM
Like the wide river that ponders the falls, before remarking in the hiss of mist; Or as a dreamless moon ponders all night, until dying from plum, sunrise kiss--awesome! Your stories always keep the reader glued to your imagery. Well done, Evelyn.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/7/2023 12:42:00 PM
So delighted that you enjoyed this tale, Vijay. I appreciate your kind remarks. :)
Date: 10/7/2023 2:37:00 AM
woah you do couplets like people have breakfast... each line so much imagery and such a great selection of words.. amazing.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/7/2023 12:39:00 PM
Thanks so much for the pleasure of your comments, Silent One. :)
Date: 10/7/2023 2:03:00 AM
I always admire how you mix colours into your poems and the existing imagery that inundates your muse—a Saturday welcome reading. Blessings.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/7/2023 12:37:00 PM
That is high praise indeed from you, my friend. Thank you very much. I hope your day is nice. :)

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