Still-Life of Autumn

Take a walk with me within the forest
gravel path, laced in peach and yellow leaves.

Inhale the spirit of air it surrounds.
Listen to the crunch and shift of coarse gravel,
see the dust rise upwards beneath our shoes,
and feel the cool wind blow our hair across our faces.

Stop, view of the bank, against large white rocks
and tall green and withered sedge blades. Listen
to the hastening heartbeat resonance
of transparent aquamarine, cool river,
where it runs deep, flowing downhill.

Tree limbs full of a brilliant autumn palette
of colors sway as the breeze quickens its pace.

Take a walk with me and breathe a piece
of heaven that beckons and awakens my spirit.



10/17/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Edmonds  Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 7:26 PM
That’s was a lovely walk within the forest with you Eve, autumn is a beautiful season and some scenes are truly heaven on earth… Belle
Blodgett Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 9:43 AM
Thanks for the excursion Eve! My favorite time of the year for sure! Happy Holidays and many joyful walks! Lonna
Mcintosh Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 3:21 AM
Beautiful Example. Love it. God bless you. Love, Gina
Roper Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Thank you, Regina. Many blessings and Merry Christmas
La France Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 6:35 AM
Eve, a truly lovely poem and wonderful example for your contest, blessings
Roper Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Thank you, Constance. Many blessings and Merry Christmas
Emate Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 6:07 AM
Congratulations Eve, what a lovely poem!
Roper Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Thank you, Thompson. Many blessings and Merry Christmas
Brul Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 7:49 PM
This is so magical! Very inspiring! Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Thank you, my friend. Many blessings and Merry Christmas
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 2:40 PM
Beautiful, enchanting, descriptive piece of poetry on Nature! Congratulations on your win. Love ~ Mala
Roper Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Thank you, Malabika. Many blessings and Merry Christmas
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 3:54 AM
Beautiful piece, Eve ~ meditative and soothing
Canerdy Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 9:25 PM
Vividly descriptive, lovely piece, Eve! Janice
Dutta Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 5:35 AM
I walked with you to feel. Great poem. 'll try the contest. Love.
La France Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:53 AM
Eve, beautiful, I was with you on your walk, this is a wonderful example for your contest, hope I can write you a beauty_Constance
Wolf Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 7:19 PM
I'm ready for that stroll, Eve! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest. Nicely done! :) Gershon
Roper Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Thank you, Gershon. Many blessings and Merry Christmas
Blodgett Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 11:18 AM
Eve what a beautiful descriptive and alluring journey!
Roper Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 9:57 AM
Thank you, Lonna. Many blessings and Merry Christmas
Radice Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 3:06 AM
I felt I was there :) A great atmospheric poem Eve.
Roper Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 8:20 PM
Thank you, Gary. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 11:53 AM
what a charming picture you paint of autumn:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 7:35 PM
Thank you, Jan. Hugs Eve
Agustin Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 6:22 AM
Thanks for letting me feel vicariously the beauty of autumn through this muse of yours. I haven't experienced such in our tropical country. God bless you.
Roper Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 7:34 PM
Thank you, Beata. I use to live in Oregon and so much of the state has not been touched by human that want to teardown for building and money. Hugs Eve
Daniel Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 6:21 AM
Such beautiful imagery, Eve, you have painted a picturesque scene from Autumn:)
Roper Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 7:31 PM
Thank you, Jo. The eyes that sees the beauty nature has blessed us by only one. Hugs Eve
Mcintosh Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 4:00 AM
A lovely example of autumn. I love this season more than any other. Love to you, Gina
Roper Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 7:30 PM
Thank you, Regina. Hugs Eve
Sands Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 10:16 AM
Eve, this is so nice and worth re-reading again. Peaceful and a FAV :)
Roper Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 7:29 PM
Thank you, Heidi, for the fav. and the inspiring words it means a lot . Hugs Eve
Rose  Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 10:07 AM
If we lived closer we'd take walks together for sure, a beautiful poem that makes me dream of warmer weather, have a great day Eve, heart prayers are being sent your way
Roper Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 7:26 PM
Thank you, my friend sister in spirit, we would do at as a daily exercise . Hugs Eve
Delaney Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 10:01 AM
Love your title, Eve:...and I can picture all the scenes you have painted. Best. SuZ
Roper Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 7:23 PM
Thank you, Suzanne,I am glad you like it and your visit; it is hard to really please some. Hugs Eve
Cunningham Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 7:09 AM
Loved the autumn imagery Eve, I love walks this time of year. Tom
Roper Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 7:21 PM
Thank you, Tom. A tranquillizer of nature. Hugs Eve
One Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 2:58 AM
Lovely imagery Eve in every line.. Autumn seems to inspire so many poets... For me, It is not my favorite month..
Roper Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 7:19 PM
Thank you, my friend, your garden that constantly invites you I know is your pleasure. I wish I had the blessing of a green thumb as yours. Hugs Eve
Buhagiar Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 2:05 AM
Perfect imagery of a favorite season. ~~
Roper Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 7:16 PM
Thank you, Victor, a walk through the forest I miss with my husband. Hugs Eve
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