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(For Contest: Foreign War) There you are...face to face with me...on Skype... thousands of miles away. A soldier, but still my son; Lieutenant Colonel, US Army, Iraq War, February 2004. You tell me you are safe. After all, you are an officer; Brigade Commander, an engineer...you have guards. You are ready...trained so well for survival. But still... things can happen, and they have, even to officers.* Each day haunts us: are you a target on that helicopter? Are you directing military feats near the war zones? Will there be hidden roadside bombs on your paths? Will suicide bombers breach the green zone at night? Too many scenarios; too many bad stories in the news. As an officer, you have to send out those sad letters about your lost soldiers...your men, your comrades... to families...now in deep shock with broken hearts. Too many sons...some daughters...not coming home. Our hearts ache for them; their waiting is now over. Dad and I, your sisters, your wife, and children wait. The days, weeks, months...years, drag by slowly; many missed Thanksgivings, Christmases, birthdays. Finally...your deployment ends; prayers are answered. Safely, you come home from the war, September 2006; two years and seven months of worry...missing...waiting. Now...fourteen years later...many others...still waiting.** Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Premiere Contest: Foreign War Sponsor: Lewis Raynes Judged: 05/29/2017 (Revision of a poem posted September 6, 2015) *Operation Iraqi Freedom: Officers Killed In Action: 427, Wounded: 1,880 **March 19, 2003: President Bush launches the invasion of Iraq December 15, 2011: President Obama declares an 'end' to the Iraq War. However, now in 2017, many more soldiers are still being deployed to Iraq... no real end...and 'war' continues with casualties. The Iraq War is listed as America's 3rd longest foreign war.

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Date: 5/30/2017 5:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sandra, Great Write to hear the real feelings of a worried mother waiting for her sons safe return, Prayers to the ones still there :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/6/2017 3:33:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by to read my poem, Glen, and for your very supportive comment and congrats. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 5/30/2017 7:52:00 AM
Hi Sandra. That's a wonderful piece you've penned... Congrats for having it placed 2nd in the contest!!! ;-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/30/2017 1:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Teddy! Sandra
Date: 5/29/2017 12:56:00 PM
Wonderful write, Sandra, your feelings so expressed. Congratulations on your win ~*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/30/2017 1:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for your nice comments and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/29/2017 2:30:00 AM
Great poem, Sandra. War will continue to be as long as it makes Billions of dollars for the military industrial complex and poor and middle class sons and daughters are willing to die for it. God bless our troops and God help them when they come home. Please come read my poem, "Puppeteers".
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/30/2017 12:51:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comment, Carole. I did read your poem, 'Puppeteers,' and it was very powerful. The only thing is...we cannot make and keep a peaceful world by ourselves...let us pray that someday all people of the world can unite in peace. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/19/2017 10:30:00 PM
This brought tears to my eyes, so well written!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/20/2017 3:00:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur, for reading my poem and for your supportive and empathetic comment. Sandra
Date: 5/19/2017 9:43:00 PM
A war with no winners.. leaving only tears and pain for those who wait...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/20/2017 3:01:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by to read my poem, Joseph, and for your supportive comments. Sandra

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