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Still Trying To Get Home Pt2

continued from Pt1 My knocks were answered by an old woman in a housedress. As I begin to explain, I felt the chill of the rain. I expected this woman to tell me I was insane. But I noticed pain in her eyes, then the tears. I wanted to disappear. Her words would forever change my outlook on the things of this world. She said "You're not the first, nor will you be the last to bring home my baby girl!" *4th Place win in "Awesome Paranomal Experience" Contest * Written for John Freemans Contest.

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Date: 2/27/2010 6:10:00 PM
Hey, handsome, Didn't I say this was a winner??? Congratulations are in order. XOXOXO to you, JAM! Love, Peanut butter
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Date: 1/22/2010 8:58:00 PM
Positively riviting ending, Jimmy!
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Date: 1/22/2010 11:44:00 AM
I want to thank you for graciously supporting my contest. I will read part 2. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 1/13/2010 2:42:00 PM
This is a sure winner to me by all standards!! I wish you luck in JohnMoses's Contest, love! Goes to my favs.! Scary, but good scary!!LOL love always, Audrey*Sunshine
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