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Still Mourning

There was a time they grew thick and fair.
I thought them friends.  They'd always be there.
What made them loosen up their grip
and say, at once, "Abandon ship"? - 
my long lost, faithless, hair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 4:23 PM
humorous and creative. 😄
Crandall Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 2:22 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Gibbons Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 11:29 AM
Love this David 😀 giggled at end happy September hugzzz friend 🫂😎
Crandall Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 2:21 PM
Haha, thanks, Dorothy!😄
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