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from fall's splendid leaf one round, perfect, silver tear waits to be released

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/8/2017 7:27:00 AM

A brief verse that makes us feel a great deal! Lovely! Congrats, Andrea!

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/7/2017 6:59:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku, Andrea. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Joseph May

Date: 5/6/2017 8:22:00 PM

Congrats on your win Andrea

James Inman

Date: 3/18/2017 9:12:00 AM

Looking for your Haiku that you entered in the contest. This one is beautiful, and so full of imagery.

Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:11:00 AM

So this is your favorite..... beauty -- nothing more than beauty... skat

Michael Dom

Date: 2/23/2013 4:36:00 PM

This is a great zoom in shot - beautiful capture!

Sean Goodwin

Date: 2/23/2013 11:47:00 AM

Fantastic imagery. I really like this a lot; exceptionally well written! Many congrats on the win. -- Sean P.S. I've sent you a reply.

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/22/2013 9:37:00 PM

Andrea, congrats on your win with this lovely haiku! Love, Kim

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/22/2013 1:31:00 AM

Hi congratulations Andy a great haiku , you do it all so well...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 2/21/2013 6:23:00 PM

Simple haiku but rich content :) congrats on you win Andrea, hug yanny

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2013 6:11:00 PM

Andrea,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/5/2013 12:19:00 AM

a long morning,,, my mornings never compare to this lovely awaiting image...pd

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/5/2013 12:18:00 AM

ANdrea, had fun reading many of your old poems... well a few were young... however, I'm not done yet...:-)

Kash Poet

Date: 2/3/2011 12:01:00 PM

Another gem from YOU !!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/12/2010 3:47:00 AM

Very nice Haiku picturing fall, Andrea! Thank you for your comments...Love, Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/24/2010 5:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your in in Raul's contest "Mourning Calm" Andrea. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/24/2010 12:27:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your win in the contest by Raul.. wonderful words tell the story of the photo... enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/23/2010 11:13:00 PM

i love fall.it's a deep season to me. & it is always a calming one, when it's not furious.also when it rains without the storms, walks are nice as well, who wouldn't want to. i love the silver tear, you did wonderful with this. -Always&Forever Lynette

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 4/23/2010 9:31:00 PM

My dear Andrea, Very original Haiku. Good luck in the contest and thank you for noticing my OOOPs! I was in between things when I wrote my epigram and just put it out there. Love u, Iolanda :)

Mike Butler

Date: 4/23/2010 8:51:00 PM

This is an excellent haiku! Congrats! That last line really captures the form. Thanks for your comment and suggestion. I fixed it. Ghazal is a hard form to master. Best, -Mike

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/23/2010 8:34:00 PM

Oh, I guess it is a winner! Sorry I missed that, just saw Paul's congratulatory remarks below. Congrats, my friend, well deserved indeed. Caroline.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/23/2010 8:33:00 PM

How beautiful this write is, Andrea. Sounds like a winner to me. Good luck and thank you for your comments on my poem. Actually the poem, Etched, is not at all about a painting. It is about a picture of someone being etched into my mind and I am translating it as if it is an artist, unseen, who is drawing the portrait that is becoming a masterpiece, which the picture becomes totally clear. I know, I'm guffy. :) Just a figment of my imagination I guess. Best wishes to you, Caroline.

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/23/2010 8:29:00 PM

Andrea, congrats on your success in my contest..Raul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2010 6:34:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, and thank you for your kind comment on my wish poem, Always the sweet one. Yes I do have a sister on the site, I can't say much do to the fact she will ring my neck..ha ha ..May be I will ring her neck j.kk.kk SHHHH! do not tell no one ...To late I posted it on your comment.p.d.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/23/2010 4:36:00 PM

Perfectly serene....simply said! :) Nice !!