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Still Loving Her

The dust has all settled I'll go get the broom sweep off the back porch and the old sitting room That wind storm was mighty almost blew me away the foundation was crumbling as the house swung and swayed The timbers were creaking the roof sprung a leak the shutters are broken it really looked bleak The old building survived It's weathered but tough It will stand tall and fight when the going gets rough There's much beauty left in this old home of mine I'll still be loving her till the end of my time
02/22/2015 Your Best Poem With Metaphors hosted by Silent One

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Date: 8/18/2015 5:21:00 PM
Tim.. Yes, my comments are late.. But I actually want to read the poem first. You master the metaphor in this deserved winner!
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Date: 8/10/2015 6:29:00 PM
TIM, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 8/10/2015 1:43:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Tim! eloquent work with great metaphors throughout!
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Date: 8/9/2015 9:22:00 PM
Excellent metaphorical piece! Thoroughly enjoyed the read and happy to see it on the winners list! Congratulations, Tim, on a great win! Pandita
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Date: 8/9/2015 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/19/2015 3:51:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 3/19/2015 11:26:00 AM
Tim, Congratulations on your awesome gathering Dust win..... Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/15/2015 7:56:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/15/2015 3:33:00 PM
Tim, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/15/2015 2:10:00 PM
Tim, your rhyming is great, unforced. Well done and congrats. BG
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Date: 3/15/2015 11:57:00 AM
Hey Tim, nice one. I found a bit of a metaphoric sense in this poem. A tinge of lost love and the frailty of our human forms as they fall into disrepair with age. Thanks for submitting this to the contest.
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Date: 3/15/2015 11:33:00 AM
I do love your take on the theme Tim a beautiful write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/23/2015 8:46:00 AM
That old cosy home with a loving nest would always be stronger than life's weathered mess.A powerful message Tim..Charma
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Date: 2/23/2015 4:28:00 PM
That is true Charma...We have to keep it nourished with love and good morals and it will weather any storm....hugs Tim
Date: 2/23/2015 8:44:00 AM
A very emotional write! I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 2/23/2015 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Richard
Date: 2/23/2015 7:59:00 AM
Wonderful! I really enjoyed your visualization on this and the multiple meanings one can take from it. Hope everything is well and you are weathering all your storms strongly my friend. hugs.
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Date: 2/23/2015 4:21:00 PM
Thanks Cas. Trying to weather the cold winter. Ready for spring
Date: 2/23/2015 4:37:00 AM
A marvelous piece of artistic beauty! What a verse! What a message! A seven , my dear friend, Tim!
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Date: 2/23/2015 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios my dear friend
Date: 2/22/2015 11:31:00 PM
Tim, this is masterpiece!
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Date: 2/23/2015 4:17:00 PM
Thank you my friend
Date: 2/22/2015 10:11:00 PM
:) I'm glad you've weathered the storm, Tim. Hugs
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Date: 2/23/2015 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Eileen..This one yes : )
Date: 2/22/2015 9:48:00 PM
Life sends us so much burden, we endure, and go on. Love this beautiful poem, Tim. 7 Blessings and hugs
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Date: 2/23/2015 4:14:00 PM
Thanks Eve..I think we are only sent what we can handle.....hugs Tim
Date: 2/22/2015 8:07:00 PM
Many storms endured but plenty of life left . . . stand tall and firm dear friend. 7
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Date: 2/23/2015 4:09:00 PM
That I will David...hugs Tim
Date: 2/22/2015 7:33:00 PM
And she deserves the love. #7
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Date: 2/23/2015 4:08:00 PM
Thanks njeri...hugs Tim