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still love you more than as before

Thousand years! Thousand years it is Long living like the undying breeze Deep down my self, deep down my ease In the thick bark of my heart a love does exist Thousand years ago There exist for my mood, a flower that glows Regulating my heartbeat and blood flow Raising my guts up and down, in rows Making my emotions like trumpets blow Thousand years! Oh so long many years And I can still feel the pricks of her lovely spear And the scent of her placating presence, like roses very rare Oh thousand years, and the love still exist, yes! I still love you, till forever nonetheless

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Date: 1/16/2016 3:48:00 AM
Nicely done, my Old Sage...Nicely done! My very best regards as always. :-) john
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white sage
Date: 1/16/2016 4:27:00 AM
thanks John
Date: 1/9/2016 2:45:00 AM
As a new member of poetrysoup and of poetry in general, and a new member of the world, this poem is by far the best I've seen so far.
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Date: 1/9/2016 7:04:00 AM
thanks Tristan, am glad you liked it...their are more better poets out here
Date: 1/7/2016 6:29:00 PM
This is such a beautiful and romantic sonnet! I've been absent and I came back to see so many beautifully written poems by newer members. Glad to be acquainted with your work. Oh and it's a POTD. Congrats!
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white sage
Date: 1/7/2016 6:50:00 PM
thanks Kim, am glad you came by
Date: 1/6/2016 8:19:00 PM
Very beautiful, White Sage. A belated congrats to you for you poem being honored Poem of the Day! Sandra
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:48:00 AM
thanks Sandra, I appreciate your comment
Date: 1/6/2016 1:07:00 AM
WS. This is a stunning poem. Congratulations on a well deserved POTD. I really love the repetition of the thousand years
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white sage
Date: 1/6/2016 2:09:00 AM
thanks Mark, am glad you like it
Date: 1/6/2016 12:25:00 AM
Sage, congratulations on poem of the day with this beautiful write, enjoy the honor ~
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white sage
Date: 1/6/2016 12:44:00 AM
thanks so much, i appreciate that
Date: 1/6/2016 12:04:00 AM
Congratulations on P.O.T.D! Outstanding poem!
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white sage
Date: 1/6/2016 12:16:00 AM
thanks Chantelle, am glad to see your words
Date: 1/5/2016 3:01:00 PM
Lovely romantic thoughts penned here. Congrats on the POTD selection. :)
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white sage
Date: 1/5/2016 4:06:00 PM
thanks Eileen...
Date: 1/5/2016 10:52:00 AM
a 7 congratulations on Poem Of the Day, White !
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white sage
Date: 1/5/2016 11:04:00 AM
thanks Eve, i appreciate your comment...
Date: 1/5/2016 7:39:00 AM
Very nicely done, a wonderful rhythm to your write. congratulations on poem of the day feature.
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Date: 1/5/2016 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Casarah, am glad you came by
Date: 1/5/2016 6:40:00 AM
congratulations
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Date: 1/5/2016 8:04:00 AM
thanks Waweru
Date: 1/5/2016 5:28:00 AM
Excellent write. Congrats on this.
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Date: 1/5/2016 7:56:00 AM
thanks Larry...
Date: 1/5/2016 4:03:00 AM
- CONGRATULATIONS P.O.T.D. !!!! :)
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white sage
Date: 1/5/2016 7:53:00 AM
thanks Anne
Date: 1/4/2016 4:58:00 PM
This is a very beautiful and deep poem , full of passion and extraordinary love , this is unbreakable love I salute you my friend.....hugs / / :) dalia
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white sage
Date: 1/5/2016 7:51:00 AM
thanks dalia, am glad you liked it
Date: 1/4/2016 2:31:00 PM
I burst into laughing as I read this wonderful piece. And enjoyable piece. Excellent........A.M.
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white sage
Date: 1/4/2016 4:07:00 PM
am glad you got a tickle from my words, thanks Afolabi
Date: 1/4/2016 2:31:00 PM
That is indeed love-Beautiful !
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white sage
Date: 1/4/2016 4:10:00 PM
thanks Charmaine... a pleasure having you come by
Date: 1/4/2016 1:36:00 PM
- A wonderful write - Beautifully reading, W.S. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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white sage
Date: 1/4/2016 4:12:00 PM
thanks Anne
Date: 1/4/2016 11:54:00 AM
Excellent, White Sage...words which flow from deep within. Real love provokes passionate emotions. ~ Regards // paul
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white sage
Date: 1/29/2016 3:46:00 PM
thanks Paul, I really appreciate that, am sorry, didn't know how I missed this...but am glad I found it...I really appreciate your comment
Date: 1/4/2016 7:21:00 AM
Yes, love is immortal for it accompanies the deathless soul! Wonderfully done dear friend, WS.
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white sage
Date: 1/4/2016 9:46:00 AM
thanks for coming by dear Demetrios
Date: 1/4/2016 3:04:00 AM
beautiful. thank you for sharing
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white sage
Date: 1/4/2016 9:33:00 AM
Thanks Sarah