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Still Love You More Than As Before

Thousand years! Thousand years it is Long living like the undying breeze Deep down my self, deep down my ease In the thick bark of my heart a love does exist Thousand years ago There exist for my mood, a flower that glows Regulating my heartbeat and blood flow Raising my guts up and down, in rows Making my emotions like trumpets blow Thousand years! Oh so long many years And I can still feel the pricks of her lovely spear And the scent of her placating presence, like roses very rare Oh thousand years, and the love still exist, yes! I still love you, till forever nonetheless

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John Fleming

Date: 1/16/2016 3:48:00 AM

Nicely done, my Old Sage...Nicely done! My very best regards as always. :-) john

White Sage
Date: 1/16/2016 4:27:00 AM

thanks John

Tristan Tupper

Date: 1/9/2016 2:45:00 AM

As a new member of poetrysoup and of poetry in general, and a new member of the world, this poem is by far the best I've seen so far.

White Sage
Date: 1/9/2016 7:04:00 AM

thanks Tristan, am glad you liked it...their are more better poets out here

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/7/2016 6:29:00 PM

This is such a beautiful and romantic sonnet! I've been absent and I came back to see so many beautifully written poems by newer members. Glad to be acquainted with your work. Oh and it's a POTD. Congrats!

White Sage
Date: 1/7/2016 6:50:00 PM

thanks Kim, am glad you came by

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/6/2016 8:19:00 PM

Very beautiful, White Sage. A belated congrats to you for you poem being honored Poem of the Day! Sandra

White Sage
Date: 1/7/2016 4:48:00 AM

thanks Sandra, I appreciate your comment

Mark Woods

Date: 1/6/2016 1:07:00 AM

WS. This is a stunning poem. Congratulations on a well deserved POTD. I really love the repetition of the thousand years

White Sage
Date: 1/6/2016 2:09:00 AM

thanks Mark, am glad you like it

Constance La France

Date: 1/6/2016 12:25:00 AM

Sage, congratulations on poem of the day with this beautiful write, enjoy the honor ~

White Sage
Date: 1/6/2016 12:44:00 AM

thanks so much, i appreciate that

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/5/2016 3:01:00 PM

Lovely romantic thoughts penned here. Congrats on the POTD selection. :)

White Sage
Date: 1/5/2016 4:06:00 PM

thanks Eileen...

Eve Roper

Date: 1/5/2016 10:52:00 AM

a 7 congratulations on Poem Of the Day, White !

White Sage
Date: 1/5/2016 11:04:00 AM

thanks Eve, i appreciate your comment...

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/5/2016 7:39:00 AM

Very nicely done, a wonderful rhythm to your write. congratulations on poem of the day feature.

White Sage
Date: 1/5/2016 8:08:00 AM

Thanks Casarah, am glad you came by

Waweru Ngugi

Date: 1/5/2016 6:40:00 AM

congratulations

White Sage
Date: 1/5/2016 8:04:00 AM

thanks Waweru

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/5/2016 4:03:00 AM

- CONGRATULATIONS P.O.T.D. !!!! :)

White Sage
Date: 1/5/2016 7:53:00 AM

thanks Anne

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/4/2016 4:58:00 PM

This is a very beautiful and deep poem , full of passion and extraordinary love , this is unbreakable love I salute you my friend.....hugs / / :) dalia

White Sage
Date: 1/5/2016 7:51:00 AM

thanks dalia, am glad you liked it

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 1/4/2016 2:31:00 PM

I burst into laughing as I read this wonderful piece. And enjoyable piece. Excellent........A.M.

White Sage
Date: 1/4/2016 4:07:00 PM

am glad you got a tickle from my words, thanks Afolabi