White Sage Poet Sonnet

Still Love You More Than As Before

Thousand years! Thousand years it is
Long living like the undying breeze
Deep down my self, deep down my ease
In the thick bark of my heart a love does exist
Thousand years ago
There exist for my mood, a flower that glows
Regulating my heartbeat and blood flow
Raising my guts up and down, in rows
Making my emotions like trumpets blow
Thousand years! Oh so long many years
And I can still feel the pricks of her lovely spear
And the scent of her placating presence, like roses very rare
Oh thousand years, and the love still exist, yes!
I still love you, till forever nonetheless

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John Fleming January 16, 2016 at 3:48 AM Nicely done, my Old Sage...Nicely done! My very best regards as always. :-) john White Sage January 16, 2016 at 4:27 AM thanks John

Tristan Tupper January 9, 2016 at 2:45 AM As a new member of poetrysoup and of poetry in general, and a new member of the world, this poem is by far the best I've seen so far. White Sage January 9, 2016 at 7:04 AM thanks Tristan, am glad you liked it...their are more better poets out here

Kp Nunez January 7, 2016 at 6:29 PM This is such a beautiful and romantic sonnet! I've been absent and I came back to see so many beautifully written poems by newer members. Glad to be acquainted with your work. Oh and it's a POTD. Congrats! White Sage January 7, 2016 at 6:50 PM thanks Kim, am glad you came by

Sandra Haight January 6, 2016 at 8:19 PM Very beautiful, White Sage. A belated congrats to you for you poem being honored Poem of the Day! Sandra White Sage January 7, 2016 at 4:48 AM thanks Sandra, I appreciate your comment

Mark Woods January 6, 2016 at 1:07 AM WS. This is a stunning poem. Congratulations on a well deserved POTD. I really love the repetition of the thousand years White Sage January 6, 2016 at 2:09 AM thanks Mark, am glad you like it

Constance La France January 6, 2016 at 12:25 AM Sage, congratulations on poem of the day with this beautiful write, enjoy the honor ~ White Sage January 6, 2016 at 12:44 AM thanks so much, i appreciate that

Eileen Manassian January 5, 2016 at 3:01 PM Lovely romantic thoughts penned here. Congrats on the POTD selection. :) White Sage January 5, 2016 at 4:06 PM thanks Eileen...

Eve Roper January 5, 2016 at 10:52 AM a 7 congratulations on Poem Of the Day, White ! White Sage January 5, 2016 at 11:04 AM thanks Eve, i appreciate your comment...

Casarah Nance January 5, 2016 at 7:39 AM Very nicely done, a wonderful rhythm to your write. congratulations on poem of the day feature. White Sage January 5, 2016 at 8:08 AM Thanks Casarah, am glad you came by

Waweru Ngugi January 5, 2016 at 6:40 AM congratulations White Sage January 5, 2016 at 8:04 AM thanks Waweru

Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2016 at 4:03 AM - CONGRATULATIONS P.O.T.D. !!!! :) White Sage January 5, 2016 at 7:53 AM thanks Anne

Dalia Shahein January 4, 2016 at 4:58 PM This is a very beautiful and deep poem , full of passion and extraordinary love , this is unbreakable love I salute you my friend.....hugs / / :) dalia White Sage January 5, 2016 at 7:51 AM thanks dalia, am glad you liked it

Charmaine Chircop January 4, 2016 at 2:31 PM That is indeed love-Beautiful ! White Sage January 4, 2016 at 4:10 PM thanks Charmaine... a pleasure having you come by

Afolabi Muideen January 4, 2016 at 2:31 PM I burst into laughing as I read this wonderful piece. And enjoyable piece. Excellent........A.M. White Sage January 4, 2016 at 4:07 PM am glad you got a tickle from my words, thanks Afolabi

Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2016 at 1:36 PM - A wonderful write - Beautifully reading, W.S. - hugs // Anne-Lise :) White Sage January 4, 2016 at 4:12 PM thanks Anne

Paul Callus January 4, 2016 at 11:54 AM Excellent, White Sage...words which flow from deep within. Real love provokes passionate emotions. ~ Regards // paul White Sage January 29, 2016 at 3:46 PM thanks Paul, I really appreciate that, am sorry, didn't know how I missed this...but am glad I found it...I really appreciate your comment

Demetrios Trifiatis January 4, 2016 at 7:21 AM Yes, love is immortal for it accompanies the deathless soul! Wonderfully done dear friend, WS. White Sage January 4, 2016 at 9:46 AM thanks for coming by dear Demetrios

Sarah Jabri January 4, 2016 at 3:04 AM beautiful. thank you for sharing White Sage January 4, 2016 at 9:33 AM Thanks Sarah