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Still Love

When we first met, in love we used to glide
on waves of bliss like pairs of sunglow swans,
now we slowly totter,and try to hide
our orthopaedic socks and thick long johns.
We still hold hands like back on that first date
but now it's less a gesture, decades on
else I'd walk off ahead then have to wait
while you found something firm to lean upon.
You said you'd like a skirt to match your eyes
I did my very best but must confess
I went to every shop but no-one buys
or maybe no-one sells a bloodshot dress.
 you run your fingers through my hair a bit,
these days I marvel just how fast it goes
these greying locks ,well, what remains of it,
from off my scalp and southwards to my nose.
Annoying habits met with just a sigh,
you snoring on the sofa after tea
or ducking as my nail clippings shoot by,
or leaving used bags out when making tea.
Love's outer shell is merely just it's name,
 inside it's precious pearl remains the same.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lindley Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 4:57 AM
A pleasure to read this insightful and delightful creation my friend. Life, Love, Friends, Family, Humor and Companionship , what would we be without such? Superbly done my friend... A fav..
Wigley Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 11:10 PM
Thanks, Robert, appreciate the visit. Hope you and family are well. Regards, Viv
Inman Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 11:03 AM
How beautiful Viv, with a bit of your characteristic humor thrown in.
Wigley Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 11:10 PM
Thanks, James, glad you liked it. Regards, Viv
Krampe Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 3:25 PM
This is lovely, Viv - humorous and tender at the same time. Growing old together is a gift.
Wigley Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 1:56 AM
Thanks, Agnes, a gift and sometimes a chore (don't tell her I said that) Viv x
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 7:25 AM
ha ha ha love it Mr Viv and this is a hilarious 'love' poem and yes we do put up with our partner's habits and they do ours lol:-) hugs jan xx
Wigley Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 1:57 AM
Thanks, Jan, Viv x
One Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 5:42 AM
Viv my friend, so wonderful to see you posting... That last line sums up your poem perfectly and I guess for many who have been together for such a long time, that is love..
Wigley Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 1:57 AM
Cheers, S.O, hope you're well, regards, Viv
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