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Still Life

Still Life Bound for the junction, the 15 Streetcar heads up the avenue, change machine chewing on coins like a man with tobacco. It moans along, sometimes choking, catching its electric breath to pull the hill. Smelling of rubber and current, a few sparks spit farewell. 3/18/15

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Date: 12/13/2016 10:16:00 AM
A very expressive and soulful poem, Janis. Your words bring your world to life with visceral intensity. You sure can grip our imagination w/your evocative prose. Magnificent poem. Love and more love to you.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 12/13/2016 11:40:00 PM
Thanks, Freddie. Coming from you, I know these are true compliments. Blessings, Janis
Date: 12/7/2016 5:20:00 PM
Some beautiful imagery here Janis.."catching its electric breath"...Love this line. You paint a wonderful "still life" with these words.
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Date: 12/7/2016 7:04:00 PM
Thanks, John. Seems like you remember the streetcars.

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