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Written - 7th November 2024
 

 

I guess you're upset, but you've cracked me up How will you manage when needing a scrub Still holding my own So put down the phone It'll cost you too much to buy a bath tub.

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Date: 11/8/2024 9:00:00 AM
Hi sister Beryl, looks ok to me lol.
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John Read
Date: 11/9/2024 5:02:00 AM
Me to sister Beryl.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/8/2024 12:42:00 PM
As long as the tap works and water goes down the sink, all is honky dory, me thinks. Thank you brother John.
Date: 11/8/2024 1:34:00 AM
I suppose super glue wouldn't do lol. Good luck in the contest Beryl. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/8/2024 12:38:00 PM
Good idea, will give it a try. Thanks Tom… Beryl
Date: 11/8/2024 1:20:00 AM
A great limerick full of fun.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/8/2024 12:24:00 PM
Thank you Victor , it was fun to write too… Beryl
Date: 11/7/2024 3:39:00 PM
Funny one Beryl!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/7/2024 4:09:00 PM
Thank you David… Beryl

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