Beryl Edmonds Poet Limerick

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Written - 7th November 2024

 

 

Still Holding my own

 I guess you're upset, but you've cracked me up
How will you manage when needing a scrub
Still holding my own
So put down the phone
It'll cost you too much to buy a bath tub.

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John Read November 8, 2024 at 9:00 AM Hi sister Beryl, looks ok to me lol. John Read November 9, 2024 at 5:02 AM Me to sister Beryl. Beryl Edmonds November 8, 2024 at 12:42 PM As long as the tap works and water goes down the sink, all is honky dory, me thinks. Thank you brother John.

Tom Cunningham November 8, 2024 at 1:34 AM I suppose super glue wouldn't do lol. Good luck in the contest Beryl. Tom Beryl Edmonds November 8, 2024 at 12:38 PM Good idea, will give it a try. Thanks Tom… Beryl

Victor Buhagiar November 8, 2024 at 1:20 AM A great limerick full of fun. Beryl Edmonds November 8, 2024 at 12:24 PM Thank you Victor , it was fun to write too… Beryl

David Crandall November 7, 2024 at 3:39 PM Funny one Beryl! Beryl Edmonds November 7, 2024 at 4:09 PM Thank you David… Beryl