Still Cold

. Cotton Candy Clouds Drifts onto the ground lightly Delaying spring's growth

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James Fraser

Date: 4/23/2010 9:12:00 AM

Nice Haiku Sara >> James

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/17/2010 3:18:00 AM

For sure it does, Sara! I'm back again on PS after my visitors left. Also posted some new Tanka. Nicely written Haiku! Like those "Cotton Candy Clouds"!...Keep your imagination flowing!...Gert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2010 10:40:00 PM

Nice one!! thanks for your comment. Luv, andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/16/2010 9:28:00 PM

Fine images conveying explicit meanings

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/16/2010 6:26:00 PM

The cotton candy clouds are intriguing, Sara. Could be a late snow or frost. New buds are fragile and require warmth. Hope spring has arrived in your hometown! Love, Carolyn

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/16/2010 6:14:00 PM

you make the still cold sound gentle. autumn is my favorite season. spring reminds me of a mother.i believe it's a season for all of them.wonderful haiku. -Always&Forever Lynette