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Still a Tree

still a tree longingly with lashes, barely seen through wrinkly lids — a mother, a child of ages ago yearns for a ten foot tree. with strength of a weaker sort, eyes still sparkle and shine for former ways, days that blink. bags the artificial with receipt. turns her eyes toward Charlie Brown. her tears shall wrap the miniscule pine, lift its sighing boughs, kissed with ribbon’d rose. her smile makes it stand up soldier straight. for Christmas day she cannot wait. 12/24/2019

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Date: 12/25/2019 3:17:00 AM
Beautiful! A fave for me, Kim.
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Date: 12/24/2019 9:14:00 PM
Merry Christmas Kim. -Richard
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Date: 12/24/2019 8:11:00 PM
Just lovely. Esp. liked that 'soldier straight!' Here's to the holiday! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2019 8:27:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 12/24/2019 6:22:00 PM
Thank you Kim, for this sweet poem. Merry Christmas.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2019 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Eric!
Date: 12/24/2019 12:11:00 PM
i wrote a poem once called melancholic tree, this reminded me of that a little...i do love that penultimate stanza.. can you please tell me the reference to Charlie Brown, what does it refer to in your life?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2019 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Silent. My dear friend, a divorcee, struggles with money so this poem was about her. She really was talking about bringing back her too expensive fake and buying a little tree. Me...I have always loved Charlie Brown. Anyway her eyes sparkle at the thought of Christmas...memories past.

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