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Stiil Waters - Etheree

Still 
 waters
 reflect hues
 of autumn gold,
 rust, and tangerines
 as the forest whispers
 to the clear October sky
 leaves descend  gently to the ground
 silence echoes through the trees as cool
 winds ripple still waters where beauty rests
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 9/20/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/13/2017 10:46:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. You have shown the reader so much with this peaceful, colorful poem :)
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Date: 12/28/2015 7:58:00 PM
A beautiful etheree.
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Date: 10/8/2015 12:04:00 AM
Wonderful etheree, Joseph! I especially liked your descriptions of autumn's colors... Congrats on a great win!
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Date: 10/5/2015 4:14:00 AM
A perfect panorama wherein you can sip on fresh air and just relax peacefully... Congrats, Joseph on your great win!
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Date: 10/4/2015 9:13:00 AM
such a serene picture Joseph many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 10/2/2015 10:20:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2015 10:42:00 PM
Very peaceful imagery through your well-chosen words, Joseph. Congrats on your fine win! Sandra
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Date: 10/1/2015 8:47:00 PM
A picture so serene, Joseph. Congrats!
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Date: 10/1/2015 12:01:00 PM
Sweet words, Joseph.
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Date: 10/1/2015 10:35:00 AM
You certainly nailed this one and cograts on the win!
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Date: 10/1/2015 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations on this beautiful entry taking top honors Joseph!
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Date: 10/1/2015 3:33:00 AM
Congrats on ur great win Joseph with this awesome write!
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Date: 10/1/2015 1:54:00 AM
The images of silence and colors work so well together in this lovely etheree for autumn waters. congrats in my contest.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/2/2015 5:12:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Andrea...hugs
Date: 9/22/2015 1:04:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/21/2015 1:50:00 AM
Lovely etheree. Nicely done.
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Date: 9/21/2015 12:47:00 AM
Hi Joseph, Wow...Andrea is going to have a tough job trying to pick her winners from what I have been reading. This piece is stunning! 7
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