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Sticks and Stones - Collaboration With Chris Green

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Those stupid words The anguish they cause So carelessly used Without second thought No sharper, these blades Which stab from the tongue Leave scars ever deep The damage is done They scrape off all skin Bury under the heart Tear down the soul Ruin innermost self Carving the pain Sliced up so small Pieces now lost Scattered the wind Build up, start again Memories, new Strengthen yourself Look up at the sky Ignore the noise Breathe in the air You are so perfect Just as you are *** June 14, 2017 Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White

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Lenna Walker

Date: 8/4/2017 11:05:00 AM

A wonderful piece penned by two great poets. It was so enjoyable finding this one today :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/1/2017 12:59:00 PM

Yes Darren ,you are perfect the way you are. Also if you feel that you are in a rut and need a friend to speak to.. I am here for you when you want to talk.Ignore them they are not worth it to be around. You are better than they are.my friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/29/2017 1:20:00 PM

Chris and Darren, words with so much wisdom led by the Spirit... ~*

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/25/2017 7:14:00 AM

A genius collaboration! Love it! Look up at the sky...is that the shape of a bird!

Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/25/2017 4:34:00 AM

Good Morning Darren and Chris. This message is perfectly perfect in every way. We all need these reminders and this is it. The ending says it all. As a side note. The music and video are beautiful also. I am such a fan of Adam Lambert. He should have won the title but he is doing just fine without it. I have seen him in concert and he is amazing with a power house of a voice. Congratulations on combining your talents. Well done entirely.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/24/2017 8:22:00 AM

A beautiful collaboration gentlemen. Also a gorgeous video you chose.

Darren White
Date: 7/24/2017 10:29:00 AM

Exactly that is what it is, rising above, thanks Richard :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/24/2017 8:24:00 AM

I like the message of rising above cutting words.

Verlecia Fields

Date: 7/24/2017 6:01:00 AM

Ok! I like - you were as one heartbeat

Darren White
Date: 7/24/2017 6:23:00 AM

Thanks so much Verlecia :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/24/2017 5:29:00 AM

I like the rhythm and the message too...Thanks for sharing...Have a nice day

Darren White
Date: 7/24/2017 5:48:00 AM

Thank you Arturo, same to you :)

Maria Williams

Date: 7/24/2017 1:40:00 AM

A wonderful collaboration yet again Darren and Chris.A short time ago we came under attack from a jealous competitor who threw a few sticks and stones, our way should we say? It did cause problems, but by the end of the day, they are only words.And what did not kill us only made us stronger. our philosophy - rise above it . Great write and I love Adam Lambert's version of Mad World....Maria

Darren White
Date: 7/24/2017 5:10:00 AM

Thanks Maria, we collaborate with ease together :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/23/2017 12:43:00 PM

Nice work guys :) great message penned by great poets xomo!

Darren White
Date: 7/24/2017 12:55:00 AM

Thanks mo :)