Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Narrative

- Sticking Relationship -

Hear it chugging and tasle
                                         The sun has gone down
                                         Twilight, is still not dark
                                   Small steps ... chugging and tasle
                                         The dog is standing still
                                           Sniffing and listening
                                           Sounds comes closer
                                   A small ball comes out of the bushes
                                      My favorite toy, the dog thinking
                                       Sticking her nose up ..... but ...
                                       The ball is full of sticking spines
                                            it makes a hissing sound
                                     Hedgehog will not play with the dog







15.06.2013
A-L  Andresen :)                 - This is my dog "Maya" :))


(5th in the contest)

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Flora Mae Gudez September 23, 2013 at 6:22 AM cool :) I also have dogs,,, I'm also planning to write a poem about my 5 dogs. Yeah right, pets are also worth for poems ^^ Anne-Lise Andresen September 23, 2013 at 6:41 AM - Definitely they are our best friends :))) - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Flora. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Alicia Lambert July 10, 2013 at 9:18 AM This is a very fun poem! I am happy that you left such a nice comment.I am glad that I was then directed to your site, looking forward to reading more of yours when I am out of work! Anne-Lise Andresen July 10, 2013 at 10:39 AM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Alicia. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair July 9, 2013 at 5:02 AM Very interesting, Anne, a nice one!! Anne-Lise Andresen July 9, 2013 at 5:28 AM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jag. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo July 7, 2013 at 5:13 PM This is pretty good. I have never seen a Hedgehog. It sounds pretty sticking. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla Anne-Lise Andresen July 7, 2013 at 5:17 PM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Lucilla. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock July 5, 2013 at 6:52 PM Love this cute poem. We are into hot weather so I have been hibernating in the cool instead of baking in the sun. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen July 7, 2013 at 4:28 PM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Phyllis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman June 25, 2013 at 3:37 PM Interesting piece of work. My son had a hedgehog... here we don't have them in the wild, and their called an exotic pet... After it's life time he got a sugar glider... it looks like a lemur... They are soooo cute... and clingy... Nam hung all over him where ever he went... They're community creatures... and don't do well alone. Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2013 at 12:14 PM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Carol. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Betty Bateson June 25, 2013 at 9:50 AM He sounds nasty. Lovely poem. Betty Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2013 at 12:14 PM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Betty. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun June 23, 2013 at 9:27 AM I love so much your poem my dear friend, Anne Lise & so enjoyed the story. I've never seen a hedgehog yet but I hope he's a friendly creature with the dog :)). A great write indeed! My big heartfelt congratulations to you with big sweetest hugs! love lots, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2013 at 12:13 PM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Leonora. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Morrison June 22, 2013 at 12:56 PM Wonderful piece! Congrats thanks for submitting1 KIm Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2013 at 12:12 PM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joyce Johnson June 22, 2013 at 11:46 AM Great entry. I remember my dog tangling with a skunk and the results. We have a few porcupines but no hedgehogs. Are they the same? congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2013 at 12:12 PM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Joyce. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

John Posey June 22, 2013 at 9:05 AM Anne, I congratulate you on a delightful entry. God's little creatures can offer some memorable moments...... Love ya dearly... Jake Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2013 at 12:11 PM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, John. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito June 19, 2013 at 11:45 AM Very, very adorable! This was fun & brilliant! Anne-Lise Andresen June 19, 2013 at 11:54 AM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Drake. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Gary Wayne Hill June 19, 2013 at 8:07 AM Ha Ha, the end did make me chuckle, why do hedgehogs turn themselves into a ball if they don't want to play. LOL Loved the poem, thanks for the smile :) Anne-Lise Andresen June 19, 2013 at 8:28 AM - They hide in their own bodies. - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Gary. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Benjamin David June 18, 2013 at 2:41 AM Very endearing :) Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2013 at 2:47 AM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Benjamin. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo June 17, 2013 at 5:10 PM This is cute. I really liked it. Thanks and God bless you.... Lucilla Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2013 at 1:37 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Lucilla. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud June 17, 2013 at 12:23 PM had to come back to read this again.. am bringing my doggie to the vet this week; she is teething, oh my... best of monday to you, anne..hello to maya :) huggs Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2013 at 12:26 PM Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Nette .- oxox / / Anne-Lise & Maya :)

Robert Pettit June 17, 2013 at 12:22 PM Nice little write here, Anne Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2013 at 12:25 PM - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Robert.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Shiraz Iqbal June 17, 2013 at 10:58 AM This sounds cute to me beautiful use of words.....i have a cat and i knw hw cute they look doing these silly things. Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2013 at 11:21 AM - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Shiraz.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick June 17, 2013 at 7:49 AM Unique work using those animals around you to write a great work..I have never seen a hedgehog in real life only on TV for I don't think that we have them here..I guess the dog liked the ball even more because it would hiss...Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2013 at 8:01 AM Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Sara.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mustapha Mohammed June 17, 2013 at 6:17 AM A lovely write dear Anne.Full of wit and beauty dear one. Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2013 at 7:59 AM - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Mustapha.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton June 17, 2013 at 5:23 AM so amusing ty for the smiles super poem much enjoyed Shadow Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2013 at 5:25 AM - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Shadow.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carl Fraser June 16, 2013 at 2:57 PM Caught my attention with this one Anne, nicely portrayed, feel sorry for what the dog, s about to recieve. Blessings Carl Anne-Lise Andresen June 16, 2013 at 3:01 PM - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Carl.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath June 16, 2013 at 11:56 AM A beautiful game of animate and inanimate things lovely pictured. Here character of dog is clearly depicted. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen June 16, 2013 at 11:57 AM - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell June 16, 2013 at 11:44 AM Haha, that is too funny, Anne-Lise. Refreshing :). Anne-Lise Andresen June 16, 2013 at 11:47 AM - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Toquyen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux June 16, 2013 at 7:27 AM This is Great! Nice twist. Anne-Lise Andresen June 16, 2013 at 7:28 AM - Thanks for visiting and your pleasant comment, Richard. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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