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Stick to HIS rules, HE not Human actually rules

( On backdrop of current JAPAN tragedy. Dedicated to all who lost lives and property in worst devastation ever. Our sincere prayers for their salvation, succour to surviving victims, early rehabilitation) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hiroshima, Nagasaki, Fukushima Nuclear destination, bombing and self-explosion Human rant, God is just name for chant Reign human invention, HE just mythological sovereign God disliked apathy, shelved sympathy thought to teach lesson, venue selected Japan Quake, Tsunami, Fire, Radioactive leak, wreck plenty 65 seconds flat, venue littered with death float Humans abuse Nature, expect HIM to spare, care HIS justice, a show reality sans court, hearing or attorney HE delivers salvation to devastation, superpower to roadside pauper Avoid HIS wrath, stick to HIS rules, HE not Human actually rules ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hitendra Mehta March 2011 For Members Contest – The Rhyme Inside by Debbie Guzzi ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Date: 4/16/2011 1:00:00 PM
Yes there is a lot in this Hitendra,i have contemplated similar to this myself.. and as i ponder the (viewpoints?) i think you have touched on some truths, and am refreshed by your honesty, it is high time to air such views..we all need to see the bigger picture!
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Date: 3/29/2011 7:18:00 PM
Congratulations Hitendra on your worthy poem's honered success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/29/2011 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Hitendra in Debbie Guzzi's contest "The Rhyme Inside". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2011 10:15:00 AM
Wow! This one goes to my favorites, Hitendra. What an interesting perspective on the reasons behind the disaster that hit Japan. Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/29/2011 4:49:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Hitendra
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Date: 3/28/2011 9:42:00 PM
wow, very intense poem on God and calamities, Hitendra! Congrats on your HM.
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Date: 3/28/2011 9:01:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to these very resilient people. Warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/28/2011 7:50:00 PM
Congrats Hitendra on your HM in Debbie's contest with this excellent entry .. superbly fitting the theme of the contest my friend.. enjoy yur very special honor with luv.. hoping u are doing well luv..
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Date: 3/28/2011 7:08:00 PM
powerful message conveyed. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 3/19/2011 10:49:00 PM
so intense i could feel the tragedy, hitendra... great inner rhyming as well... winning wishes to you.. how are you?? :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/18/2011 7:13:00 AM
I just can't believe how fast this week has gone by. I am enjoying reading the many magnificent poems here at PoetrySoup this morning. I am glad yours was among the ones I was able to read Hitendra. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with sunshine and lots of inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2011 4:51:00 PM
beautiful inside rhyme unforced and meaningful on the recent event , Hitendra. A piece of beauty
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Date: 3/17/2011 7:29:00 AM
Deeply stirring write and entry Hitendra my friend.. our prayers continually sent to Japan and it's residents luv.. amazing recollection of events and disasters plaguing these people in years gone by and currently ... humans abuse nature.. excellent line.. good luck in the contest luv..
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