Premiere Contest WinnerStepping Through Time

Maybe Someday

In a honky tonk in Denver forty years ago
I taught a strange brunette beauty how to dance real slow.
Our eyes had met and locked when the lights were way down low.
I was sure  I knew her but just how I did not know.
We spoke not a word as we swayed slowly to and fro,
Her perfume had an eastern touch, Boston maybe so.
Her iv'ry skin was perfect with that soft radiant glow
That comes from satin sheets and a sailor's salt air blow.
Our bodies moved to music that said she won't say no,
We laughed together when they did the Cotton - Eyed Joe.
Then she was gone - disappeared -and left a note just so.
It said, "Thank you, cowboy! Maybe someday - Jackie O."

1/23/2017
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Roberts Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Congratulations Very enjoyable easy flow
Medders Tobechi Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 10:49 PM
This is great. Moves like a rock and roll song. Love it. A 7. Congratulations on your trophy win.
Roper Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 1:40 PM
Wonderful poem, Larry, very well deserved win :) congratulations Hugs Eve
Bradfield Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 2:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Burch Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 12:10 PM
Loved it!! Well deserving first place win Larry!! Made me smile!! Congratulations! Hugggs. Deb
Bradfield Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 2:02 PM
Thank you, Deborah.....I appreciate the smile!!..Larry
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 10:54 PM
Larry, this poem was just a lot if fun! Thanks and congrats on your top win!
Bradfield Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 2:03 PM
Thanks, Kim. I thought thte contest was fun in itslf!!..Larry
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 11:19 PM
Of fun!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 11:19 PM
Of fun!
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January 24, 2017 at 12:01 PM
Bravo, Larry. You hit the nail on the head with this excellent piece which is sure to hit the top of the winning chart! A-7! I thoroughly enjoyed the read! Best wishes. Pandita
Bradfield Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 1:19 PM
What a genuinely nice comment, Pandita! Thank you for your words and your interest! You are most kind...Larry
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