Stepping Through Time

Tiny diner in the middle of nothing
Gravel parking lot empty of cars
Screen door bangs as we step through
Formica tables polished until gleaming
Bobby socked waitresses giggling 
Homemade biscuits and eggs served runny
Total due just $2.65 after breakfast for two
Return in a week finding dusty windows 
Empty diner closed since 1964
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 11:26 PM
Christi honestly did this happen to you??? If so, that is amazing!!
Freeman Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 4:44 PM
Christi, Thank you for supporting my contest with your poem. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
Dufresne Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 3:38 PM
Far out . congrats Christi on this poem win!
Devonshire Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 7:23 AM
A very spooky poem that I enjoyed immensely, Christi! Congratulations on your success in John's contest. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 7:07 AM
Congrats Christi on your second place win in Moses contest.. a wonderful win for an exciting poem..enjoy your victory ..luv.. Linda-Marie
Sokolowski Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 2:26 PM
beautiful work of art
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace