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Stepping Over the Line

Listen - I'm a grown ass woman And I ain't got that much time Left on this earth That I'm going to worry about What I can say And what I can't According to proper Friendship etiquette So if I want to verbally Step over that line And tell you I think you're hot Knowing full well That an impenetrable fortress Will never be breached What is the big deal? So I'm going to say it I think you're hot From the safety Of a text message For Raul Moreno's "Unspoken Words" contest

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Date: 1/14/2010 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations Corinne, on your success in Raul Moreno’s “Unspoken Words” contest with your Hot, but not too far over the line (lol) poem. It's easy to see why you won 2nd place. Your poetic skills excel. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/13/2010 7:23:00 PM
Hey, congratulations!!!
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Date: 1/11/2010 8:33:00 AM
Congrats on your successes in the recent contest Corinne.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/10/2010 10:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, Corinee. Hot and spicy! Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/10/2010 8:21:00 PM
Congratulations Corinne! Your poem was so much fun to read. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 1/10/2010 3:10:00 PM
Well done!! Congratulations on your 2nd place win!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/8/2010 6:54:00 PM
It's a free verse! Haa! Sincerely Love, Moses
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Date: 1/7/2010 12:14:00 PM
LOve it!! Best of luck in that contest!! andrea
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Date: 1/7/2010 8:38:00 AM
Corinne u are a trip.. luv and thankxxx for your blog comment on my football blog.. I am addicted to the sport.. can't contain myself some weekends over the games.. I guess having four sons u learn to luv the game as they all played at one time or another with visions of going to the pros one day... enjoyed your words very much... as well as your poem here today.. have a great new year with many creative writes and comments... luv .. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/7/2010 6:34:00 AM
Hello, song-bird! This be real earthy...love it. "From the safety of a text-message." This is crafty...aint we all. Love, daver
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