Corinne Curcio Poet Free verse

Stepping Over the Line

Listen - 
I'm a grown ass woman
And I ain't got that much time
Left on this earth
That I'm going to worry about
What I can say
And what I can't
According to proper
Friendship etiquette

So if I want to verbally 
Step over that line
And tell you 
I think you're hot
Knowing full well
That an impenetrable fortress
Will never be breached
What is the big deal?

So I'm going to say it
I think you're hot 

From the safety
Of a text message


For Raul Moreno's "Unspoken Words" contest

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 14, 2010 at 7:31 AM Congratulations Corinne, on your success in Raul Moreno’s “Unspoken Words” contest with your Hot, but not too far over the line (lol) poem. It's easy to see why you won 2nd place. Your poetic skills excel. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich January 13, 2010 at 7:23 PM Hey, congratulations!!!

Brian Strand January 11, 2010 at 8:33 AM Congrats on your successes in the recent contest Corinne.Rgds Brian

Elaine George January 10, 2010 at 10:32 PM Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, Corinee. Hot and spicy! Love, Lainie

Connie Marcum Wong January 10, 2010 at 8:21 PM Congratulations Corinne! Your poem was so much fun to read. Blessings, Connie

Carrie Richards January 10, 2010 at 3:10 PM Well done!! Congratulations on your 2nd place win!! ~ Carrie

John Freeman January 8, 2010 at 6:54 PM It's a free verse! Haa! Sincerely Love, Moses

Andrea Dietrich January 7, 2010 at 12:14 PM LOve it!! Best of luck in that contest!! andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 7, 2010 at 8:38 AM Corinne u are a trip.. luv and thankxxx for your blog comment on my football blog.. I am addicted to the sport.. can't contain myself some weekends over the games.. I guess having four sons u learn to luv the game as they all played at one time or another with visions of going to the pros one day... enjoyed your words very much... as well as your poem here today.. have a great new year with many creative writes and comments... luv .. Linda-Marie..

Daver Austin January 7, 2010 at 6:34 AM Hello, song-bird! This be real earthy...love it. "From the safety of a text-message." This is crafty...aint we all. Love, daver