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Stepping Into Heaven

Under your heavenly gaze magic appears perfect 
a thousand whispers sail through the oceans current 
each wave warmly echoes of a sun filled promise 
Our time is held when precious jewels they glimmer 
every breath gasps breathless holding dearest soul
where the silken ribbons circle around a gift tied 
wrapped within angel rays floating inside heartbeats

Copyright © Liam Mcdaid | Year Posted 2017

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 11/29/2017 6:33:00 PM Hello Liam, this is a nice version of Heaven. I have enjoyed this poem.Have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 11/25/2017 8:00:00 AM Beautiful. Words of silk. Well done, Liam. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 11/23/2017 12:16:00 AM Beautiful, lian, congratulations on POTD Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/22/2017 11:20:00 PM Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful Liam! Congratulations on having this inspiring poem honored with POTD! This is a Fave for me! Login to Reply

Judith S Date: 11/22/2017 10:50:00 PM Congratulations on POTD Liam with this lovely write !!! Best, Judy Login to Reply

Bjorn Wastvedt Date: 11/22/2017 9:29:00 PM A beautiful Liam! :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/22/2017 6:35:00 PM The title is absolutely perfect Liam, reading your words is like stepping into romantic heaven:-) congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 11/22/2017 3:33:00 PM Beautiful poem, Liam. A thousand whispers sail through the ocean's current ... This poem oozes w/romantic love. Kudos on POTD. Love and joy always. Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/22/2017 2:14:00 PM The poem is as brilliant as the gems it speaks of. Adding this to my fav list liam. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/22/2017 12:44:00 PM - Congratulations with your p.o.t.d., Liam ... well deserved :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 11/22/2017 12:01:00 PM Hi Liam, one certainly walks into Heaven when one steps into one of your poems. You definitely have always had the gift of gently pulling the reader into the heart of your words. Most deserving of Poem Of The Day honours my friend. I hope you are well bud. This one has to be a fave. Congratulations, from the Joker to the King. Your pen shall always run gold. Your friend always....Mike. Login to Reply

Sunlite Wanter Date: 11/22/2017 11:33:00 AM Reading is like listening to lovely music. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Gary Bateman Date: 11/22/2017 10:56:00 AM Hello Liam Mate!! Congratulations on the POTD honor. A truly beautiful and quite inspiring write. Your vision here of one "stepping into heaven" is masterfully revealed by the tone and tenor of the images you've used, and used very effectively!! A FAVE FOR SURE!! Best Always, Gary Login to Reply

Arturo Michael Date: 11/22/2017 10:29:00 AM A beautiful poem expressing his heavenly gaze...Congratulations Liam Login to Reply

Donna Loughman Date: 11/22/2017 8:28:00 AM Liam, congratulations on this beautifully written and crafted poem! Well deserved POTD! Your pen is liquid gold...:-) Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 11/22/2017 7:48:00 AM Lovely thoughts Liam, congratulations for POTD honors, well deserved... Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 11/22/2017 7:22:00 AM Congratulations Liam on POTD honors with your beautifully expressed enchanting write full of romantically vivid imagery. Enjoyed! Login to Reply

James Haley Date: 11/22/2017 6:40:00 AM The river flows We follow its turns Through rapids and rocks It’s energy burns It takes us where It mercifully goes With calming straights The river flows Lakes are found Their beauty grows With shores abound From rocky rows Through still then force It rhombs to the sea The river flows Like you Like me Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 11/22/2017 5:49:00 AM Congrats on POTD Liam... Login to Reply

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 11/22/2017 4:53:00 AM Hi Liam!:)) A very huge congratulations on POTD! Very much deserved my dearest friend Liam. A very beautiful poem! Just awesome! I'm so very happy for you.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply

Winged Warrior Date: 11/22/2017 4:36:00 AM Congrats my friend on POTD...heavenly write Liam...god bless...*WW* Login to Reply

Maria Williams Date: 11/22/2017 4:13:00 AM Congrats on your POTD Liam, well deserved on this beautiful write... Maria Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2017 2:51:00 PM - A beautiful and romantic poem, Liam - Nice to see you - I'll send you an email - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 11/21/2017 10:52:00 AM Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply