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7 lines the steps up to heaven's light 

Stepping Into Heaven

Under your heavenly gaze magic appears perfect 
a thousand whispers sail through the oceans current 
each wave warmly echoes of a sun filled promise 
Our time is held when precious jewels they glimmer 
every breath gasps breathless holding dearest soul
where the silken ribbons circle around a gift tied 
wrapped within angel rays floating inside heartbeats
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 6:33 PM
Hello Liam, this is a nice version of Heaven. I have enjoyed this poem.Have a nice evening my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Beautiful. Words of silk. Well done, Liam.
Roper Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 12:16 AM
Beautiful, lian, congratulations on POTD Hugs Eve ~`*
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 11:20 PM
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful Liam! Congratulations on having this inspiring poem honored with POTD! This is a Fave for me!
S     Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 10:50 PM
Congratulations on POTD Liam with this lovely write !!! Best, Judy
Wastvedt Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 9:29 PM
A beautiful Liam! :)
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 6:35 PM
The title is absolutely perfect Liam, reading your words is like stepping into romantic heaven:-) congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 3:33 PM
Beautiful poem, Liam. A thousand whispers sail through the ocean's current ... This poem oozes w/romantic love. Kudos on POTD. Love and joy always.
Yvonne Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 2:14 PM
The poem is as brilliant as the gems it speaks of. Adding this to my fav list liam.
Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 12:44 PM
- Congratulations with your p.o.t.d., Liam ... well deserved :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Raven Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 12:01 PM
Hi Liam, one certainly walks into Heaven when one steps into one of your poems. You definitely have always had the gift of gently pulling the reader into the heart of your words. Most deserving of Poem Of The Day honours my friend. I hope you are well bud. This one has to be a fave. Congratulations, from the Joker to the King. Your pen shall always run gold. Your friend always....Mike.
Wanter Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 11:33 AM
Reading is like listening to lovely music. Congratulations!
Bateman Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 10:56 AM
Hello Liam Mate!! Congratulations on the POTD honor. A truly beautiful and quite inspiring write. Your vision here of one "stepping into heaven" is masterfully revealed by the tone and tenor of the images you've used, and used very effectively!! A FAVE FOR SURE!! Best Always, Gary
Michael Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 10:29 AM
A beautiful poem expressing his heavenly gaze...Congratulations Liam
Loughman Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Liam, congratulations on this beautifully written and crafted poem! Well deserved POTD! Your pen is liquid gold...:-)
Smith Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 7:48 AM
Lovely thoughts Liam, congratulations for POTD honors, well deserved...
Ashley Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Congratulations Liam on POTD honors with your beautifully expressed enchanting write full of romantically vivid imagery. Enjoyed!
Haley Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 6:40 AM
The river flows We follow its turns Through rapids and rocks It’s energy burns It takes us where It mercifully goes With calming straights The river flows Lakes are found Their beauty grows With shores abound From rocky rows Through still then force It rhombs to the sea The river flows Like you Like me
One Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 5:49 AM
Congrats on POTD Liam...
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 4:53 AM
Hi Liam!:)) A very huge congratulations on POTD! Very much deserved my dearest friend Liam. A very beautiful poem! Just awesome! I'm so very happy for you.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Warrior Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 4:36 AM
Congrats my friend on POTD...heavenly write Liam...god bless...*WW*
Williams Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 4:13 AM
Congrats on your POTD Liam, well deserved on this beautiful write... Maria
Andresen Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 2:51 PM
- A beautiful and romantic poem, Liam - Nice to see you - I'll send you an email - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 10:52 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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