Viv Wigley Poet Rhyme

Steppin' Out

I saw a pal of mine in town
all dressed up to the nines,
hours of preparation and
the result was divine.
Crop top, Denim miniskirt
jet black killer heels,
feet at forty-five degrees
God knows how that must feel.
Sashay past the building site
wolf whistles and remarks,
they all got no acknowledgement,
reaction? Not a spark.
Cool, aloof, just striding on
the pace really unhurried
I honestly do have to say that
Colin- you've got me worried.

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 29, 2015 at 2:52 PM LOL...reminds me of the old Kinks song, Lola...just don't try kissing him! Hugs, Rhonda Viv Wigley March 30, 2015 at 6:14 AM Adam's apple- a dead giveaway. Viv x

Jan Allison March 29, 2015 at 7:03 AM Simply hilarious Viv - a 7 from me :-) Hugs Jan xx Viv Wigley March 29, 2015 at 1:08 PM Thanks, Jan, you can't beat a bit of levity every now and then. Gotta go- this mankini's starting to chafe x

Constance La France March 28, 2015 at 1:28 PM Viv, this was delightful, I was thinking who could walk on those heels!!!! a perfect 7 rating and thanks for visiting my poem, blossoms and bubbles . . . Viv Wigley March 28, 2015 at 1:35 PM Thanks, and the pleasure was all mine. A lovely piece. Viv x

Paul Callus March 28, 2015 at 11:13 AM Very entertaining, Viv! Thanks for sharing! // paul Viv Wigley March 28, 2015 at 1:13 PM Thanks, Paul. Have a groovy weekend. Regards, Viv

Derek Harper March 28, 2015 at 9:39 AM Viv, late getting back, apologies. Love this poem. reminds me of 'shaved her legs and he was a she....' by the great man. Are you in the UK? Viv Wigley March 28, 2015 at 10:37 AM Aye, lad. Derbyshire born and bred, me duck. Yes, you're right, a gentle nod to Lou Reed.

Lindsay Laurie March 27, 2015 at 8:55 PM G'day Viv... just imagining the look on your face when Colin made his presence is enough to giggle at let alone him stirring up the testosterone on a building site. Thanks for the laugh Viv - Lindsay Viv Wigley March 28, 2015 at 3:22 AM Ayup, Lindsay. Yes, it takes allsorts to make a world.