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Stellar Being

When time's frame glints across an endless cloud Deepening the blue of serenity, My eyes unveil this mystical tableau As life's creation lingers to bestow; This moment radiant , graced by life's flow… And I, a stellar being, am enticed By my physical essence so engraved, Yet formed through Spirit's pattern--a god child Endowing peace through a realm of oneness, While breaths ascend layers of earthly trails Journeying higher than twilight’s soft flame, An infinite species, I learn to emerge In a blend of human genes... and divine mold. Any Poem Written On April 4th, 5th or 6th 2016 Sponsor: Laura Loo Posted 4/5/2016

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Date: 8/26/2016 3:40:00 PM
So lovely and deep, Nette. You have painted such a peaceful vision. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/26/2016 3:00:00 PM
I like your Cosmic Beings, Nette -- but, are we an infinite species? I'm not so sure.... Congrats! :-)
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Date: 8/26/2016 12:36:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win beautifully written. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/26/2016 12:05:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/26/2016 10:33:00 AM
Nette, you always make me feel so serene in your poems, your gift never ceases to amaze me lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 4/9/2016 3:25:00 PM
Excellent poem my lovely friend. Congrats a lot. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/7/2016 2:01:00 AM
Very creative; congratulations!
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Date: 4/6/2016 9:41:00 PM
Hi Nette, Congrats on your "New Species win." LINDA
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Date: 4/6/2016 9:55:00 AM
To weave a divine spirit into a poem, you do it as no one else can do. Each poem in itself, a new species We all strive to write one, with each challenge! :) Congrats to you, Nette :)
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Date: 4/6/2016 7:24:00 AM
Very lyrical, Nette! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 4/6/2016 1:59:00 AM
Congrats on a worthy win with this superb write nette..
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Date: 4/5/2016 11:40:00 AM
I celebrate with you the highest essence of mankind. Am taken through a journey of earthy life, though personal to you, made universal and spiritual through your poetry.
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Date: 4/5/2016 11:34:00 AM
Phenomenal in its glorification of man as supernatural being. Your poetry always has that quality factor in it!
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Date: 4/5/2016 8:27:00 AM
Stunning write, nette. You truly are gifted. Peace young lady:)
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