Steamy Summer Treats

“Ice cream, ice cream two for a quarter” but we were already lining up Mr. Softee’s* song beckoned sultry vacation days in the suburbs no air-conditioning back then not one neighbor had a pool so “Slip ‘N Slide was the way to keep cool bedtime came before summer’s sunset but only after Dad’s nightly stories sometimes funny, sometimes scary he made them up as he went along weekends were wild at the Jersey Shore sun, sand, surf and boardwalks but it was the family time I loved most as I dreaded that first school bell
*Mr. Softee was an ice cream truck similar to the Good Humor man. Entry for the “Summer” Contest Summer in the Suburbs and at the beach
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Kendrick Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 10:53 AM
Way to go with this winning work..Congrats.Sara
Johnson Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 7:02 PM
I like this one a lot, Carolyn. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:46 AM
Awesome win with three stanza suite. Congrats, very unique, Carolyn
Vaso Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 10:09 PM
A beautiful poem of memories!
Thirtyseven Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 12:46 AM
Summer holidays. You've captured them so well that I can feel them. Nice.
Maverick Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 11:07 PM
Thank you for telling us about those Days Carolyn' it stirs memorys of Similar times for me.."
Horsman Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 9:56 AM
love this Carolyn, just browsing your poems... hope you are keeping well.....
Williams Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Carolyn, belated congrats on your win..David
K. Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 10:56 AM
I really enjoyed this summery nostalgic write, Carolyn! I scream for ice cream! Super congrats on your win and I hope you are doing good! You take care always, ok? Hugs to you!
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the Summer contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 7:10 PM
This makes me long for the good old days. Congrats on the HM. A lovely little poem, Carolyn.
Richards Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 6:43 PM
Oh....if only we could turn the clock back for just a day, and have a day like this once again!! Summer was heavenly!!
Guzzi Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 6:03 PM
such sweet memories..I too love ice cream in the summer..the REAL stuff though from a dairy! BIG HUGS Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Babcock Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 9:30 AM
forgot--see old age is near ha ha I will email you when I get home on the weekend. Kids are coming down for the football game so will catch a ride home with them.
Babcock Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 9:26 AM
Nice memories of summer time at the Jersey Shore. soup mail
Sivey Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 12:23 PM
I agree with you 100% Carolyn! I always dreaded that first day of school too, Especially after a fun filled and exciting summer vacation! I lived in the country so the sprinklers were all we had to cool off with and then we had many neighbors come over and join our fun, taking turns running through the sprinkler! I remember those days as if it was yesterday! I really enjoyed your pleasant and delightful write my friend! It was lovely to read such a grandiose piece! Great Work!!
Nair Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 7:23 AM
Yeah, back then , there was that joy that came with the limitations, makes a nostalgic read, luv, :) Jag
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