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Sealed surely by the Savior’s security-settlement… Sometimes... shaken, shattered, shocked, stricken; sick, sorrowful, suffering; Stand strong*, steadfastly serve, spirited soldiers!
*Ephesians 6:10 Finally, my brethren, be strong in the Lord, and in the power of his might. Sijo with Alliteration April 27, 2018 1st place, "Your Best Sijo" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by William Kekaula; judged on 10/13/2021.

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Date: 10/15/2021 1:47:00 PM
I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 10/13/2021 11:10:00 PM
An admirable piece, Beata, your composed entry with its exceptional alliteration my friend! Blessings, Aloha!
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Date: 10/13/2021 11:10:00 PM
Superb alliteration, yet, rooted in the Bible. Great Work. Congratulations!
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