Steadfast

waves hit mountain endlessly ~ stand tall 7.07.2021 For Bite Size Poem no11, Line Gauthier 2nd place 1st place Brain Strand contest

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Date: 7/13/2021 12:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. "Wonderful" Have a blessed day.

Date: 7/12/2021 11:11:00 AM

Great mental, visceral imagery my friend! Congratulations on your win with this beauty!

Date: 7/12/2021 1:45:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Date: 7/8/2021 8:10:00 PM

Rama, congrats on your winning haiku! Blessings, Kim M

Date: 7/8/2021 6:02:00 AM

TOO GOOD. Congrats

Date: 7/7/2021 3:28:00 PM

What God states in stone, will stand forever. Love this my friend.

Date: 7/7/2021 11:53:00 AM

Rama, in this ultra-concise piece, you have conveyed a powerful message about perseverance. Janice

Date: 7/7/2021 11:52:00 AM

ahhh, this is GOOD

Date: 7/7/2021 11:31:00 AM

Its nice that in this world of impermanence, some things stay the same. Mountains are majestic, love your poetic, surge today dear Rama. thank you