Staying Awhile

Bought at an antiques store for a song:
unframed print #225 of 750, signed by the artist
Number III of the family name, all painters,
(presumably) Those forbears hard to discard--
"Stay Awhile" its title, hospitably captioned by
a country boy, like my father, perhaps-- posing 
beside his favorite horse on the back roads 
of Race Pond, Georgia, his playground by 
birthright, the Okefenokee Swamp.

Staying awhile, I place myself in the painting,
its cool morning mist in the hills beyond.
The white clapboard house, red-roofed, six
front windows, one dormer peeking out 
from the eaves; four steps up to the porch
from the under-the-house black earth the house 
was built on; its checkered slats at the base 
prohibiting the crawl space where the doodlebugs 
hide.  Kitchen matches to be left untouched, 
heeding the grownups chide.  Only to the bugs 
is it dire: "Doodlebug,doodlebug, hurry 
on home--your house is on fire.

Two Christmassy trees hug at opposite ends 
of the house, awaiting December decoration. 
A grassy knoll rolls down to masses 
of white and yellow sunflowers in a frenzied
welcome.  Past the grayed barn where 
tools are kept and the horses are tethered, 
I place myself in the painting, flying Superman style, 
spread eagle, arms out, facing downward
past clapboard house, barn.  Then, into the hills
with their pale promise of perennial dawn where 
there is no sorrow, no pain, no heavy heart 
unshared, no loss we cannot bear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 6, 2015 at 10:15 AM
Such a beautiful painting Nola.....your imagery is so serene.....hugs Tim
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