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staying a night in a haunted house

1548 Linden Avenue has a reputation for being haunted. It’s scary, eerie, people have died in there, they cautioned me. I was offered a thousand dollars to stay here one whole night. I brought my sleeping bag, a flashlight, a book and snacks. Everything was fine for the first couple of hours, and I fell asleep. A loud crash woke me up; my heart beat was erratic and fast. What was that? I felt like I was hearing Poe’s telltale heart. Confident it was my imagination, I tried to go back to my slumber. A voice in my head said “be alert, they want you dead.” My body began shaking violently. My teeth were clicking together. Don’t be silly! I told myself, this was not me. It is futile to fight, the entity told me. No one leaves this house alive. I tried to open the front door. It was locked tight. I decided to push the window open. it must have been nailed shut. I knew I would not be leaving this house alive. Suddenly a thousand dollars did not seem like a great deal.

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Date: 9/21/2024 10:58:00 AM
Hi Caren even though it sounds scary I'd give it a go for 1000 dollars.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/22/2024 8:26:00 AM
if you never got out? Hmmmmmm
Date: 9/21/2024 9:52:00 AM
Ooooooh...a great beginning to a very spooky tale, Caren. Reads like a movie Jamie Lee Curtis might star in.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/22/2024 8:26:00 AM
I would love to see her as the star
Date: 9/21/2024 6:40:00 AM
hi Caren, your poetry is so enjoyable, have you publish books ?, just curious am i, have a nice week end poet
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/22/2024 8:27:00 AM
I have 22 published books; if you see me on www.allpoetry.com I am pinkfaerie5 and you can see all 22 of them

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry