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Stay On the Line

Stay on the line
please talk to me a little more
stay on the line
please keep my request don't decline
today I have unlocked heart's door
words will rain like heavy downpour
stay on the line





© kash poet(21st July)
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Placement: 10th; (July 2011)

By:kashinath karmakar

Contest:Rondelet

Sponsor:Dr Ram Mehta

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2011 11:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/31/2011 9:42:00 PM

"words will ..." great line. congratulations on your win!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/31/2011 9:06:00 PM

Very nice Kashinath. Congratulations and thank you for your many kind comments. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 7/31/2011 8:36:00 PM

Kashinath, Congratulations in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/31/2011 6:40:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS~~~~smile for the placement~~~*-*junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2011 5:27:00 PM

Congrats Kash on a terrific win with these amazing entertaining lines of dynamic poetry luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/31/2011 5:20:00 PM

I'd never leave you hanging on the line, Kash. You have such a sweet heart. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 7/31/2011 4:04:00 PM

Many congrats, Kash : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2011 3:47:00 PM

ALL RIGHT, I see you changed that one line and it LOOKS great, Kash. A big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Joseph Osita

Date: 7/31/2011 3:04:00 PM

Congrats on your big place win in Dr Ram's contest

Tim B

Date: 7/31/2011 3:01:00 PM

Congrats on your win, an excellent poem with a lot of emotion.

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 7/31/2011 2:39:00 PM

A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/31/2011 2:17:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in my contest, kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2011 9:47:00 PM

Hello, by the way!! I am here for just 15 min. and then I'll be skeedaddling

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2011 9:46:00 PM

Kash, why didnt' you change the line yet? I think you should say "Stay on the line" OR "Keep on the phone." LUv ya, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2011 7:39:00 AM

oops, I misspelled a word down there. Can you guess which one?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2011 7:38:00 AM

Hey, this is really a nice idea for rondelet. I sure need to hurry on doing one of these myself. I already missed the mask contest and saw too late it was filled. My life is in such dissarray, KAsh. will tell ya later. When you say Keep the phone. What does that mean for you, Kash? Hang it up or keep holding it? I wanted to know if the poem is about keeping someone on the line or making them talk to their face and not keep the phone in their hand. How are things going for you. Luv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/22/2011 5:22:00 AM

thankxx dear friend..I completely overlooked the them reading so fast to write..haha..that is me ..appreciate and just wrote my new entry going to post.. much appreciated luv... hoping to judge my contest today before the shut down at 5 p.m.. our time... but still need one entry..oh..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/22/2011 12:38:00 AM

oi, kashi... anything new?? come visit!! :) huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/21/2011 6:14:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, kaSHINATH

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/21/2011 2:47:00 PM

With so much time spent on computers and telephones, people rarely engage in meaningful face-to-face conversation anymore, Kash. So sad, but true. Great Rondelet. A new form for me, but I'm going to try and write one as well. Sending you winning wishes for Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/21/2011 2:31:00 PM

a wonderful write using the new form Kash and a topic we all relate to .. amazing as always..good luck luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/21/2011 1:45:00 PM

ring, ring, hello!! a fascinating piece,kashi... i likey..winning wishes to you! :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 7/21/2011 10:34:00 AM

That is very nice! Keep it going.

Kash Poet

Date: 7/21/2011 10:22:00 AM

Please talk to me more!!