Stay On the Line

Stay on the line please talk to me a little more stay on the line please keep my request don't decline today I have unlocked heart's door words will rain like heavy downpour stay on the line © kash poet(21st July) ======================= Placement: 10th; (July 2011) By:kashinath karmakar Contest:Rondelet Sponsor:Dr Ram Mehta
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Brown Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
Susan Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 9:42 PM
"words will ..." great line. congratulations on your win!
Johnson Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 9:06 PM
Very nice Kashinath. Congratulations and thank you for your many kind comments. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 8:36 PM
Kashinath, Congratulations in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
Villanueva Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 6:40 PM
CONGRATULATIONS~~~~smile for the placement~~~*-*junjun
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:27 PM
Congrats Kash on a terrific win with these amazing entertaining lines of dynamic poetry luv..
Devonshire Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:20 PM
I'd never leave you hanging on the line, Kash. You have such a sweet heart. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
Horne Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 4:04 PM
Many congrats, Kash : )
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 3:47 PM
ALL RIGHT, I see you changed that one line and it LOOKS great, Kash. A big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea
Osita Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 3:04 PM
Congrats on your big place win in Dr Ram's contest
B Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 3:01 PM
Congrats on your win, an excellent poem with a lot of emotion.
Ramsdale Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 2:39 PM
A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Caryl
Mehta Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 2:17 PM
My congratulations on this win in my contest, kashinath
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 9:47 PM
Hello, by the way!! I am here for just 15 min. and then I'll be skeedaddling
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 9:46 PM
Kash, why didnt' you change the line yet? I think you should say "Stay on the line" OR "Keep on the phone." LUv ya, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 7:39 AM
oops, I misspelled a word down there. Can you guess which one?
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 7:38 AM
Hey, this is really a nice idea for rondelet. I sure need to hurry on doing one of these myself. I already missed the mask contest and saw too late it was filled. My life is in such dissarray, KAsh. will tell ya later. When you say Keep the phone. What does that mean for you, Kash? Hang it up or keep holding it? I wanted to know if the poem is about keeping someone on the line or making them talk to their face and not keep the phone in their hand. How are things going for you. Luv, andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 5:22 AM
thankxx dear friend..I completely overlooked the them reading so fast to write..haha..that is me ..appreciate and just wrote my new entry going to post.. much appreciated luv... hoping to judge my contest today before the shut down at 5 p.m.. our time... but still need one entry..oh..
Onclaud Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 12:38 AM
oi, kashi... anything new?? come visit!! :) huggs, nette
Mehta Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 6:14 PM
Thanks for the entry, kaSHINATH
Devonshire Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 2:47 PM
With so much time spent on computers and telephones, people rarely engage in meaningful face-to-face conversation anymore, Kash. So sad, but true. Great Rondelet. A new form for me, but I'm going to try and write one as well. Sending you winning wishes for Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 2:31 PM
a wonderful write using the new form Kash and a topic we all relate to .. amazing as always..good luck luv..
Onclaud Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 1:45 PM
ring, ring, hello!! a fascinating piece,kashi... i likey..winning wishes to you! :)
Kearley Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 10:34 AM
That is very nice! Keep it going.
Poet Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 10:22 AM
Please talk to me more!!
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