State of Independence

Arise children, and witness a new dawn is breaking.
The bright eastern sun rises.  It’s time for awaking.
We now tread upon our land in newly found freedom.
Yesterday’s yoke of encumbrance was a conundrum.
We climb the mountains and cross the rivers of our own.
No longer are there distant powers we must condone.
Take a handful of the fertile soil of our home ground.
Witness the growing fruits of our labors all around.
The colonials that drained the life out of our land
have departed soon after our people took a stand.
Voices raised high proclaim this state of independence.
Together, we can assure it maintains permanence.
.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

George   Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Powerful rendering, Robert. Many congrat's on your well-deserved win. Lainie
Mehta Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 10:48 PM
Many congrats Robert in Drakes contest with this maginative write my friend. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
Onclaud Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 6:20 AM
such a solid declaration of one's beliefs.. best cheers for stunning win! :) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 2:23 PM
Congrats Robert on your HM in Drake's contest with this superb write and entry my friend.. enjoy your very special honor luv..
Mehta Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Drake, Robert
Freeman Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 12:26 PM
Great Job Robert. Good to see you honored again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored success in Drake's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Robert. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 4:27 AM
Superb entry into the new contest Robert... .. especially enjoued witness the growing fruits of our labors all around.. good luck my friend and thankxx for your woo woo wonderful comment .. a real uplifter early in the morning luv..
M V Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 1:53 AM
Very inspirational political write,Robert.Sweetly rhyming.Thanks for congrats
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace