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State of Confusion

I wish I knew where I was going But I don't even know where I've been If I knew how to find the ending I might know where to begin I'm not lost I'm just confused That's where I think I am I know I sound forgetful But what if that's the plan I make up my mind at least twice a day And I can't even make my bed That says a lot about me I'm sure Or what's lurking inside of my head Ok now you can all stop laughing And pointing your fingers at me I Live in a state of confusion And I think I'm happy to be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/7/2010 3:58:00 PM
Congratz on being featured, nice poem
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Date: 10/5/2010 3:49:00 PM
congrats on being featured this week..I love this poem..I have lots of days like that..BG
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Date: 10/5/2010 2:11:00 AM
You are not alone in this state, Larry...Great write to dispel the feelings of confusion! Congrats on being featured this week. Dan C
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Date: 10/4/2010 3:44:00 PM
good poem! saw it as i was going through, also looked at some of your other stuff. keep on writing is all i can say.
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Date: 10/4/2010 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Larry. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2010 3:43:00 AM
states of confusion can sometimes mask the painful bits of life ... I enjoyed reading this one tonight Larry well done and congrates on being featured this week love Jayne
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Date: 10/4/2010 12:42:00 AM
interesting confusion this, enjoyed. Harry
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Date: 10/3/2010 9:12:00 PM
Congrats Larry on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:19:00 PM
This is so funny...I love it...Marty
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Date: 2/5/2010 4:37:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets and please continue to share your creative writes with us all .. as this delight tonight... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/5/2010 4:24:00 PM
Oh but we're not laughing at you but at your humorous poem.. Kep up the good work. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/5/2010 3:46:00 PM
funny, enjoyed reading todday, I am in the state too.
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Date: 2/5/2010 3:28:00 PM
Interesting spin on the word "confusion" .. sweet write Larry .. enjoyed the flavor of your words.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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